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    candel Jud Dil Vich!

    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Shaiir hazraat say guzarish hai, baraye mehrbani hamari ghaltiyon ki nashan-dehi zaroor ker dein, bohat nawazish ho gi. Jazak ALLAH!

    IMLA MEIN AIK GHALTI HAI,"HUM SHAM" NAHI, BALKAY, "HER SAHM" HAI!

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    chupp chupp k rona penda ay

    zaberdast hai Hijab
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    Jazak ALLAH Rani for liking!

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    overall buhat achi likhi hai Hijab ap nay


    lakin ik do jaga me ko laga keh ager ap aisay likhti tu kaisa lagta


    mean jesay 2nd line main

    Akhiyan Wich Hanjowan Diyan Lehran Wagdiyan Aye

    kerti tu kaisa lagta?

    or ik Chaan Ki Jaga Chanani Raat ker leti tu or acha lagta...



    or last line jo ap nay likhi hai us ki mujay samhj nahi ayi...


    bas yeh me k views hain...lakin me ko pasand ayi hai ap ki poetry..as u know me ko punjabi poetry buhat pasand hai..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    bohat bohat nawazish dear Dua....
    aap nay apni qeemti aara say nawaza........aap ka bohat bohat shukriya!
    wisar ka matlab hota hai kay kise cheez ka adhay rastay he chout jaana......namukamil rehna
    shayd hum sahi taran say poerty ki shakil mein nahi dhal sakay!

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    aray nahi jani..me koi samhj nahi a rahi thi keh likha kaya hai,...me ko nahi pata tha keh wesar ka yeh matlab hai...ais liye kaha tha keh last line ki samhj nahi ayi...


    buhat achi likhi hai ap nay poem..

    ainda b likhiye ga punjabi poetry me ko pasand hai... ...me say likhi he nahi jati punjabi poetry..
    SD ki Basanti

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    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    bahot khoob Hijaab,bahot khoobsurat nazam kahi aap ne,so daad qabool kijiye,
    albata wazn ka masla beharhaal mojood hai,jo ke aahista aahista hi hal ho ga,
    so bas mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,umeed hai ke jald hi kuchh seekhaney sikhaaney ka silsila yahaan shuru kiya jaaye ga,yaqeenan aap ko kaafi madad miley gi us se,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    wahhhh.. punjabi ka khoob imtezaaj hai .. nazm pasand ayee.. bari achi kohsish hai .. MashaAllah.. daad-o-tehseen aap ki nazr.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Aap sab ki qeemti aa'ra kay mamnoun hein hum. Bohat bohat nawazish!

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    Humein Panjabi Nahin Aati Warna Islaah Zaroor Kar Dete


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