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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    aslamalykum master ji

    mein iss waqt sirf hazeri lagwanay ayi hoon

    baad mein tafseelan jawabat lay kar aati hoon
    ranisrequest - Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Assalamo-Alekam!
    yeh hum kia dekh rahey hein........hum yahan naa atay....tou hamein kise nay batanay ki zehmat he gawara nahi kerni thi kay class shuro ho gaye hai.......hum per shad'e marg ka doura parnay wala tha.......
    aur zindagi mein hum pehli baar kitnay pal he ankehin kholay yak tak dekhtay rahay.........

    khair.....itni achi class shuro karnay per dherooooooooooooooooooooooo shukriyassssssssssssss Usatd Zain Sahib!
    ab tou hum nay dou dou classon mein dakhla lay liya hai
    lekin hamara masal yah hai kay hum 8 ghantay school mein hotay hein.....aur net per hum sirf haftay kay 5 dino mein ziada say ziada 1 ghanta atay hein....tou yeh sabq kafi ghour talab hota hai...tou kia aap is ko thora sa chota ker dein gay........min'mina kar iltijaa kartay hein hum!
    Walekum Aslaam,
    arrey yeh kesey ho sakta hai ke aap ko bataya na jaata,yeh class to shuru hi aap ke kehney par huyi hai,
    silsila pasand karney ka shukriya,
    lekin aek baat aap sab se kehna chaahoonga ke main ustaad wustaad naheen hoon,mujh main aor aap main bas itna hi farq hai ke main ne shaairy ki is class main daakhila kuchh maah pehley le liya,is liye aap sab se kuchh thora sa aagey hoon,
    so plz mujhey ustaad naheen kaha karain,sirf zain hi theek hai,

    aap bilkul be fikr rahain,aor time ki wajah se pareshaan na hon,aap aaraam se lekin tawajah se in asbaaq ko paRain,samjhain,aor jahaan koyi uljhan mehsoos karain,poochh lain,main INSHA ALLAH samjhaaney ke liye mojood hoon,
    yeh sabaq choonke sirf shaairy ki asnaaf ka ta.aaruf hi hai,aor is main mashq karney waali koyi cheez naheen hai,is liye yeh thora sa lamba hai,(agla sabaq bhi aesa hi ho ga),lekin jab ham woh sabaq shuru karain ge,jin main mashq karney ki zaroorat parti hai,to phir sabaq yaqeenan mukhtasar rakhain ge,ta ke us par sahee tarah se mashq ho sakey,
    filhaal aap sirf in asnaaf ko baghor paRiye,aor baar baar paRiye,us waqt tak jab tak aap sahee tarah se samajh na jaayain ke sheir kaya hota hai,ghazal kaya hoti hai,qitta kaya hota hai,aor in ki pehchaan kaya hai.jahaan baat samajh main na aaye,bila jhijhak poochh lain.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    Jee zain ab mujhe baat samaj agaye hai...yehe chez main soch rahe hon ke shair or fard aik jaise hote hain.is he waja se uljah gaye thi ab samaj bilkul sahe tarah agaye hai..waise aik bar maine aik shair likha tha jo sirf aik akela he hai ...zara app bataye gai yeh shair hia ya Fard kuke maine sirf aik he likha tha. yeh dekhye

    qs6uma - Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    agar yeh aesa hi hai,jesa aap ne bataya,yehni yeh waahid sheir hai jo aap ne kaha,to phir yeh yaqeenan fard hi hai.
    jab bhi,is sheir ko is ke istalaahi naam se pukaarain ge to is ko fard hi kahain ge.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    aslamalykum master ji

    mein iss waqt sirf hazeri lagwanay ayi hoon

    baad mein tafseelan jawabat lay kar aati hoon
    WALEKUM ASLAAM,

    par yeh Master kon hai yahaan?

    aap ki haazari lag gayi hai,lekin aap kon se jawaab leney ja rahi hain,main ne to koyi sawaal hi naheen kiya,
    is mazmoon ko ghor se,samajh samajh kar paRiye,aor shairy ki asnaaf ko aor un main mojood farq ko samajhney ki koshish kijiye,agar koyi baat samajh main na aaye,ya koyi sawaal zehan main aaye to bila jhijhak poochhiye,aagey chal ke bahot kaam aaney waali hain yeh info.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    master ji = jo seekha rahay hein

    master ji jab mein nay kuch parrha he nahi toh mujhay kesay pata k aap nay kiya poocha hai aur kia nahi

    khair mein baad mein parrh kar aati hoon, kyon-k iss waqt mujhay fish & chips yaad aarahy hein
    ranisrequest - Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    master ji = jo seekha rahay hein

    master ji jab mein nay kuch parrha he nahi toh mujhay kesay pata k aap nay kiya poocha hai aur kia nahi

    khair mein baad mein parrh kar aati hoon, kyon-k iss waqt mujhay fish & chips yaad aarahy hein
    kar di na ghalti aatey saath hi,....jo sikha raha hai ussey Master naheen,MR kehtey hain,ta.seeh kar lo,

    koyi baat naheen,take ur time,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Zain ya silsila shuru kar k aap nay nehyat hi umda qaam kiya hay , mai aik mudat say is kosish mai rha hoon k kuch jaan saku , aur phir bhi meri pyaas nahi bujhi , laykin umeed hay k yha meri bhot ISLAH ho jay gi ,

    INSHALAH ISLAH aur Taraahi Ghazal ka bhi silsila shuru karya ga takay tamaam shura k kaalaam mai wazan , aur khubsurti mazeed ay

    Mai INSHALAH saath saath hoon

    FeamnAllah

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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    Quote Originally Posted by Bheegi-Palkain View Post
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Zain ya silsila shuru kar k aap nay nehyat hi umda qaam kiya hay , mai aik mudat say is kosish mai rha hoon k kuch jaan saku , aur phir bhi meri pyaas nahi bujhi , laykin umeed hay k yha meri bhot ISLAH ho jay gi ,

    INSHALAH ISLAH aur Taraahi Ghazal ka bhi silsila shuru karya ga takay tamaam shura k kaalaam mai wazan , aur khubsurti mazeed ay

    Mai INSHALAH saath saath hoon

    FeamnAllah

    WALEKUM ASLAAM,
    bahot shukriya hosala afzaayi ke liye,
    ji bilkul,INSHA ALLAH meri poori koshish rahey gi ke taraahi muqaabalaon ka silsila bhi jald shuru kiya jaaye,lekin main chaahata hoon ke pehley is mehfil ke saathiyon ko taqtee karna,aor shaairy ke ramooz aor aozaan se aagaahi karaayi jaaye,tabhi maza aaye ga taraahi muqaabaloN ka,
    aap ke saath deney ka shukriya,bas aap jesey mukhlis saathiyon ka saath hi to chaahiye,phir INSHA ALLAH sab theek hota jaaye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    very useful master ji
    ranisrequest - Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

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    Default Re: Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Theek hai Mr. Zain, agar aap ko Ustad kehlwana acha nahi lagta tou hum nahi kahein gey.......lekin hum sirf aap ko naam say nahi pukarein gey!
    Aur INSHALLAH hum aap kay asbaaq ko baqaida print ker kay booklet bana lein gey aur jaisay imtihan ki tayari kartay hein waisay parein gey....kyon kay Shayri bhi hamari aik manzil hai aur rasta tou hamein sehal karnay ho ga na
    Aap ko yaqeen dilatay hein kay apni pori akal bhira kay hum mashq kiya karein gey INSHALLAH!

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