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    Default Apne Ehsas Se Choo Kar

    Aslamualekum

    Doston Waise To Main Apni Orignal Collection Share Nahin

    Karta Lekin Wasi Shah Ki Ek Ghazal Edit Ki Hai


    Apne Ehsas Se Choo Kar


    Maine Poochna Hai Kiya Is Section Main Edit Ghazals

    Post Kar Sakte Hain?

    Aap Ke Jawab Ka Muntazir

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    Walekum Aslaam,
    ummmmm,
    asooli tor par to aap ke is sawaal ka jawaab section mod ko dena chaahiye,
    lekin choonke woh kam kam hi nazar aati hai is section main,is liye main yeh jasaarat kar raha hoon,
    merey khayaal,aor raaye main to POET CLUB main sirf aor sirf apna kalaam hi share hona chaahiye,

    wesey mujhey is baat ka afsos hai ke main aap ko aap ka zaati kalaam ham se sare karney ke liye qaail naheen kar saka,
    aor is baat ka dukh bhi hai ke aap ne hamain apne kalaam sey mehzooz honey se mehroom rakha,kher......
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Apne Ehsas Se Choo Kar

    zain ne sahe kha hia...agar humne aik ko allow kiya tu dosra bhi ajaye ga phir yeh karne app apni sharing sos main kijeye ..kuke yaha apni likhi hue poetry share ki jati hia..

    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    ji bilkul.. agar aap ki edit se muraad.. usi zameen ko istemal kertay huye apnay khayalat pirona hai to aap bilkul yahan share ker saktay hein.. kyun ke wo aap ki zati takhleeq hi hai.. chahay qafiye radeef wasi sahib walay hi kyun na hon .. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - Apne Ehsas Se Choo Kar

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: Apne Ehsas Se Choo Kar

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    Walekum Aslaam,
    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    ummmmm,
    asooli tor par to aap ke is sawaal ka jawaab section mod ko dena chaahiye,
    lekin choonke woh kam kam hi nazar aati hai is section main,is liye main yeh jasaarat kar raha hoon,
    merey khayaal,aor raaye main to POET CLUB main sirf aor sirf apna kalaam hi share hona chaahiye,

    wesey mujhey is baat ka afsos hai ke main aap ko aap ka zaati kalaam ham se sare karney ke liye qaail naheen kar saka,
    aor is baat ka dukh bhi hai ke aap ne hamain apne kalaam sey mehzooz honey se mehroom rakha,kher......
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,




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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    zain ne sahe kha hia...agar humne aik ko allow kiya tu dosra bhi ajaye ga phir yeh karne app apni sharing sos main kijeye ..kuke yaha apni likhi hue poetry share ki jati hia..


    Naaz Jee Jaise Aap Ki Marzi

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    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    ji bilkul.. agar aap ki edit se muraad.. usi zameen ko istemal kertay huye apnay khayalat pirona hai to aap bilkul yahan share ker saktay hein.. kyun ke wo aap ki zati takhleeq hi hai.. chahay qafiye radeef wasi sahib walay hi kyun na hon .. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove

    Dost Pehle Naaz Jee Ki Ijaazat Leni Pare Gi

    Aap Ki Hausla Afzaayi Ka Bohot Bohot Shukirya Dost

    Khush Rahiye

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silent Tears View Post
    Dost Pehle Naaz Jee Ki Ijaazat Leni Pare Gi

    Aap Ki Hausla Afzaayi Ka Bohot Bohot Shukirya Dost

    Khush Rahiye
    janab-e-Silent.. main ne jo guzarshaat kee'n.. agar to ap ki ghazal unn per poora utarti hai .. to Naz sahiba bhi aap ko nahi rok sakti.. asool un ke liye bhi utnay hi hein.. jitnay deegar ahbaab ke liye.. Nawazish.. 4012 - Apne Ehsas Se Choo Kar

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: Apne Ehsas Se Choo Kar

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    Walekum Aslaam,
    ummmmm,
    asooli tor par to aap ke is sawaal ka jawaab section mod ko dena chaahiye,
    lekin choonke woh kam kam hi nazar aati hai is section main,is liye main yeh jasaarat kar raha hoon,
    merey khayaal,aor raaye main to POET CLUB main sirf aor sirf apna kalaam hi share hona chaahiye,

    wesey mujhey is baat ka afsos hai ke main aap ko aap ka zaati kalaam ham se sare karney ke liye qaail naheen kar saka,
    aor is baat ka dukh bhi hai ke aap ne hamain apne kalaam sey mehzooz honey se mehroom rakha,kher......
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

    main chahy kam kam hi aon bt meri nazr may sab postz hoti hain or main ay yeh post b dekhi thi bt reply nahi kia coz i wznt sure...so me nazo appi say puchy bina kuj keh nahi skti thi
    so unhi k ans ka wait keri thi


    any way agree vth u

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