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    candel Aaj Mila Tou Ajnabi Sa Laga!

    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Yeh hum nay kafi dafa lafzon ko agay peech ker kay kuch tarteeb di hai.
    Baray-e-Mehrbani islah zaroor kijeay ga


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    wha buhat umdha ...........
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    Wah Jee Wah Zabardast


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    bahot khoob Hijaab,achhi koshish hai ghazal kehney ki,khayalaat khaas tor se pasand aaye,so daad qabool kijiye,

    ab aek kaam aor kijiye,apni is ghazal ko saamaney rakh ke,ghazal ki jo ta.areef/asool main ne bataaye hain,woh dekhiye,aor jaananey ki koshish kijiye ke kaya yeh ghazal ki sharaait poori karti hai ke naheen,agar khaami hai to kaya,yehni,
    1,matla,........kaya aap ki is ghazal main matla mojood hai?
    2, qaafiya,.....kaya is ghazal main qaafiya ki pabandi huyi hai?
    3,radeef,.......kaya is ghazal main radeef ki pabandi huyi hai?
    4,maqta,......kaya ghazal main maqta mojood hai?
    in chaaron sawaalon ke jawaab dhoondiye,aor phir mujhey bataaiye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    aap sab ka bohat shukriya!
    @ Zain Sahib!
    ji, INSHALLAH bohat jald hum aap ko bata dein gey

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    achay khayalat baandhy.. daad hazir hai qabool kijiye.. aakhri shair ka pehla misra bohat taveel ho gaya.. aap ghor keren to aap ko bhi ehsaas hoga.. so rawani na rahi .. dekh lijiye ga.. abhi aap ke liye yehi bohat hai .. InshaAllah ahista ahista shairi ke romooz-o-alayim khultay jayen gey.. safar jari rakhiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - Aaj Mila Tou Ajnabi Sa Laga!

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    sahe kehrahe hian withlove sub bhot acha hia leekn last main ravai toat gaye...isko dekho jaise zain ne kha hia...aik khoubsurat ghazal samne ajaye gi...
    Main un sheesha garahon se pochta hon
    K toota dil bhi jorra hai kisi ney



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    Default Re: Aaj Mila Tou Ajnabi Sa Laga!

    aha bht achi koshish dear

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    acha likha hai hijab jani..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    wah hijab

    bht khoobsurt

    bht sada or umda alfaz or bht acha khayal


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