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    Default jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    main phir aa gaya,tang to naheen aaye na meri shaairy se,
    tang ho bhi to main ne kon sa baaz aana hai,
    achha ab hansana bas,ghazal paRiye,aor bataaiye ke kesi hai,
    bahot khush rahiye,




    jodilthabasakoonmera - jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi

    Walekam-Asalm
    hahahahaha
    waqeye hum tang aa gayey hein
    ab kia batayen kaise hai.........aise ghazal kay bus alfaaz nahi hain hamaray pass














    abhi parhi nahi hai na ise liye tareef maar rahey hein
    school kay pc mein show nahi ho rahi.......ghar jaa ker parein gey

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    Default Re: jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi

    Ke jis pe Naz hona tha wo he tanha guzari thi
    edit karing post or apne naam se lagaying bus
    naam mera hia tu meri hue
    umda hia janab ....aik aik shair
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi

    aha

    mht hi acha likha hai janab

    or khoobsorat poetry ka intzaar rhay ga

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    bhula doo'n kis tarah aakhir, wo sham-e-aarzoo apni
    ke jis per naaz hona tha, wohi tanha guzari thi..

    wahhhhh.. kya hi kehnay.. Bohat Nawazish.. ke aap ne apni mayari shayeri pesh kernay ka silsila jari rakha hua hai .. ghazal Behad achi hai .. daad qabool kijiye.. hum se tishna kamon ka khayal rakhnay ka Behad Shukria..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    wow! zerdast!

    zain sahb aap jitni shayeri b share kar lo, hum tang nahi hoon gay
    ranisrequest - jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi

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    Default Re: jo dil tha be sakooN mera,ajab jo be qaraari thi

    wah kiya baat hai

    zaberdast zain

    bohat achi ghazal hai

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    such much jhuti tareef nahi karein gey........aap ki her ghazal aik say barh ker aik hoti hai aur ghazab yeh hai kay her shair bhi aik say bhar ker aik hota hai.........
    gehryai mein utra jayey tab yeh itnay gheri baatein takhleeq ki jaa sakti hain
    asan lafzon mein pori kahani sunayi hai aap nay........"kam wah wah"

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    buhat he zaberdast likha hai...really v nice...
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    bht zbrdst

    bht bht bht umda

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