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    cute ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    Salam dosto tay dostaniyo..


    buht arsay baad koi poem design ki hai batayi ga kaisi hai

    ik urdu mistake hai bas.. abhi abhi dekhi..

    Kisi Roz hai sahi word Kaisi Roz nai...



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    Last edited by ~*Rano*~; 02-03-2009 at 05:35 AM.
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

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    Default Re: ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    aik nahi bhot sari mistakes hian urdu ki

    1st line main raseda main Alif nahi hey ata hai

    chalo aisa karo main bhi mistake chaalo hogaya wo tu

    or

    tu yaad dilwaongi aise words ko mila ker likhna chahye.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    waise image tu acha hia
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    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    aik nahi bhot sari mistakes hian urdu ki

    1st line main raseda main Alif nahi hey ata hai

    chalo aisa karo main bhi mistake chaalo hogaya wo tu

    or

    tu yaad dilwaongi aise words ko mila ker likhna chahye.




    ini galtiyan..


    likh ker change karo doon gi ab..

    me ki urdu buhat kamzoor ho gayi hai..


    me nay mehar say b poucha tha sahi likha kehti haan..
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    Default Re: ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    waise image tu acha hia

    me ka dil tout gaya ab..


    thanku..
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    Default Re: ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    Han meko pata hai dil toat gaya hoga leken
    agr me na kehti koi or kehta
    isliye me ne kehdiya

    u likh ker na phele meko dikha diya karo
    mehar ki urdu kaun sa thek hia
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    Default Re: ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    theek hai appo ainda say u ko dikha diya karon gi....



    waisay likhi kaisi hai me nay poem?
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    Default Re: ~*Wohi Tumhari Ik Yaad*~

    poem u ne khud likhi hai ?
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    bohata acha likha aur compose kia hai

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