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    Default ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    dosto main phir se haazir,apni aek nayi ghazal ke saath,nayi to kher naheen hain,kuchh arsa pehley kahi thi,balke yeh kehna ziyaada behtar hai ke meri pehli ghazal hai,jo baaqaaida waz,aor behar ka khayaal rakh ke kahi thi,
    so ghazal paRiye,lekin apni bahot qeemati aara se nawaazana naheen bhooliye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,



    ghazal1jabsejaanam - ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    bahoot khoob janab nice poetry
    bahoot khoobsurat gazal likhia hai aap ne
    dilduniyameinsiggysd - ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

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    Default Re: ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

    Walekam-Aslam
    very well written!

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    bht achey gazal likhye hai
    http://www.sachiidosti.com/forum/signaturepics/sigpic155_1.gifimagephp?typesigpic&ampuserid155&ampdateline1223536520 - ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

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    bhot umda janab...ap ki tarif kaise ki jaye yeh samj he nahi ati
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    bhot umda janab...ap ki tarif kaise ki jaye yeh samj he nahi ati

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Me ki trha kar lo


    Bhottttttttttttttt Umda Zain


    FeamnAllah

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    yaar zain kamal ki ghazal kahi hay..or is main kuch tumhara andaz e bayan badla huwa dikha huwa...boht saadgi say tum nay share kahain hain...or ye kawish mujhay bay had pasand aai hay,,tarannum ,taghazzul,sahl e mumtana,,sabhi kuch hay ustaad ji sada khush raho..or parhwatay raho or daad samait tay raho
    love thou - ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wasi Anjum View Post
    bahoot khoob janab nice poetry
    bahoot khoobsurat gazal likhia hai aap ne

    bahot shukriya Wasi anjum saahib,is hosala afzaayi ke liye,
    aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Walekam-Aslam
    very well written!


    bahot shukriya Hijab,
    aap hamesha hi bahot pzeeraayi karti haiN,jis ke liye be had mamnoon hoon,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

    Quote Originally Posted by ur_friend View Post
    bht achey gazal likhye hai
    bahot shukriya MY_FRIEND,
    aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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