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    Default Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    kesey mizaaj haiN dosto? umeed hai sab bakheir hoNge,
    aaj bahot dinoN baad kuchh naya likha to socha aap sab se bhi share karooN,so ghazal peish-e-khidmat hai,
    aap ki aara ka yaqeenan intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Zain.


    naghabraomusaafatse2 - Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal


    hum theek thak hein janab? aap sunayein
    ufffffffffffffffffffffff, ghazal tou aap nay had say ziada haseen likhi hai janab
    it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful
    every word, every misra is sooooooooo powerful and deep


    great, fabulous, amazing hai

    in mein kuch words mujhe surely pata nahi hai, yeh bata dein:
    waiz
    ado..(insan?)
    karay-zia

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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post

    hum theek thak hein janab? aap sunayein
    ufffffffffffffffffffffff, ghazal tou aap nay had say ziada haseen likhi hai janab
    it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful
    every word, every misra is sooooooooo powerful and deep


    great, fabulous, amazing hai

    in mein kuch words mujhe surely pata nahi hai, yeh bata dein:
    waiz
    ado..(insan?)
    karay-zia
    bahot shukriya Hijab,ghazal ki pasandeedagi aor is qadar dil khol ke pazeerayi karney par maiN aap ka mamnoon hooN,

    alfaaz ka matlab bataaney ke liye maiN hooN na,so no fikar,
    waaiz = naseehat karney waala
    adu= dushman
    kaar =kaam, feil,kartoot, wagheira.
    kaar-e-ziyaaN= aesa kaam jis maiN sirf nuqsaan ho.

    ghazal ki pasandeedagi ke liye aek baar phir bahot shukriya,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal


    you are welcome sir
    sir aap say aik request hai. aap nay hamein shayri k basics tou sikha diyey hein. radeef, qafiya, taqtee, zameen, khiyal say hum tou waqif hein aur yeh bhi pata hai k behar shayri ka wazan hota hai. lekin yeh nahi pata k yeh wazan kaisay kiya jaata hai.
    aap please hamein kise example say bata dein na k yeh wazan kaisay kiya jaata hai?
    because i think shyd ise taran hum log bhi kabhi ramouz ko samjhtey huey kuch likh sakein.
    aap please hamein wazan kerna sikha dein.

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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal

    boht hi khooob Ishtiaq bhai,, kamal likha hay,, really awesome,, superb

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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal

    zain uncle Hijab ne itni tarif karde
    mera khaya hai main nhe karo tu behter hia
    kahe tabait na kharab hojaye zaida sun ker

    awesome

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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal

    woow xcellent

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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal

    wah kia baat hai

    lajawb ...

    bht zabrdst

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    Default Re: Na ghabraao musaafat se.....,taaza ghazal

    khoob kaha hai..

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