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    Default dard jagaaiy barish nay

    ye ghazal kisi zamanay main boht mohabbt say kahi thi...ye meri wahid ghazal hay jis kay baray main az raah e maa iltimaas krta hon k is ki tareef hi kijiye ga.. mera dil chahta hay kay aap is ghazal ki boht ziyada tareef karain.. main hamesha khud pe tanqeed pasand krta hon magr.....!
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    Last edited by dreamer; 02-05-2008 at 02:31 PM.
    love thou - dard jagaaiy barish nay

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    Default Re: dard jagaaiy barish nay

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Agr aap Tareef ka na bhi khaty tab bhi mai tareef hi karta , is liya nahi k aap aur mai aik hi jagha hay balky is liya k aap nay jo Ghazal kahi hay mujhy khud aap nay mazi mai phoncha diya aur her shair asa laga jasy k mujh per likha gya hoon ,

    Bhot shukriya itni khubsuart Ghazal paish karnay ka

    FeamnAllah

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    BAhoot khoob janab achha likha hai
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    Default Re: dard jagaaiy barish nay

    Assalamo-Alekam Sir Ji!
    Yaqeen maniye hamein khud barish had say ziada pasand hai aur yahan rehtey huey tou is janoon ko taskeen bhi mil jaati hai
    Hum nay bohat dafa chaha kay barish mein kuch likhein, lekin abhi tak kamyaab nahi huay!
    Behtreen shayri her parnay walay ko mutasir karti hai aur shayri cheez he aise hai jo insan kay jazbaat ki tarjumani karti hai.
    Moun boli tareef nahi hai, aap nay bohat he umda ghazal kahe hai, aik aik lafz bohat he gherayi aur apnaiyat say likha gaya hai!
    Hamein parh ker bohat he acha laga!
    Hamesha aisa he acha likhety rahiye aur hum say zaroor share kijeay!
    Hamesha khush rahiye

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    Default Re: dard jagaaiy barish nay

    Great Sharing

    Mazeed Sharing Ka Intezar Rahe Ga

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    barish

    bht hi zbrdst likha hai hmsha ki terha


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    barish

    bht hi zbrdst likha hai hmsha ki terha


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    buhat umdha ..............
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    aaj nagar mein dair talak barish hui
    meray haal pe ashak bahaye barish nay

    bohat he zaberdast
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    Default Re: dard jagaaiy barish nay

    bht acha likha hai barish kie moxee ko ley ker
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