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    candel Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    Assalamo-Alekam!
    4 months pehlay likhi thi yeh ghazal, jab hamein poetry kay ramouz ka bilkul nahi pata tha!
    Yeh hamaray mood kay bilkul ber-aks hai, just a poetry, No Offense!

    Yeh pata nahi Inpage mein likhtey huey kuch mistake ho gaye
    dou lines nazar nahi aa rahi thi, hum nay Roman mein add ker di hein


    1 1 - Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    Hum bhi fazayon mein urnay lagay hein
    nam ankh tou rehti thi her pal he
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    v.nice
    http://www.sachiidosti.com/forum/signaturepics/sigpic155_1.gifimagephp?typesigpic&ampuserid155&ampdateline1223536520 - Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

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    khayalat achay hein.. daad qabool kijiye.. main koi shayer to nahi.. chota monh bari baat..magar ghazal parh ker ahsaas hua ke 4 saal purani hogi.. rawani ki kafi kami rahi .. ho sakay to nazar sani kjiye.. ghazal niker jaye gi.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    bohat bohat nawaizsh
    koshish zaroor karien gey ji

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    Default Re: Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    wow, zaberdast

    bohat acha likha hai Hijab
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    Default Re: Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    buhat he khoobsurat likha hai hijab jani..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    buhat umdha janab........
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    Default Re: Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    BOHT hi umda kiya baat hay..kiya kahnay hain hijaab... tum to chaagae ho idhar boht saari daad ! or boht saari toaseef! aik misray main`` lafzon men likhna`` ki jaga ``lafzon men kahna`` hojaiy to ye khoobsorat misra or khobsorat hojaiyga ... boht sari daad aap kay liye hijaab!
    love thou - Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

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    Default Re: Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    bahot khoob Hijab,bahot achhi koshish hai yeh bhi,so daad qabool kijiye,
    issi tarah mashq jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH mazeed behtari aaye gi kalaam main,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

    sab ka bohat bohat shukriya'
    aap ki tanqeed aur mashwaron ki bohat zaroorat hoti hai
    aap sab kay bohat mashkoor hein

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