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    Default ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    aaj aek aor ghazal aap se share kar raha hoon,
    apni bahot qeemati aara se zaroor nawaaziye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,


    ghazal5ikkiranwohmaangkaraaftaabhog - ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    last wala tu

    mehfil lout le janab ne
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Sukh usi ke sab huye, dukh sabhi mere liye
    uljhanen sulajh gayee'n, sab hisaab ho gaye

    wahhh.. janab-e-ishtiaq.. kya hi kehnay.. tamam tar ghazal umdah ashaar liye.. lutf aa gaya.. maqta to khoob hi kaha.. mundarja bala shair eik mukamal takhleeq hai .. dhairo'n daad-o-mubarakbaad iss kamyabi ki nazr.. Bohat Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Walekam-Aslam
    waisay tou aap ki sari ghazal he behtreen hoti hai
    lekin kuch ashar bohat he umda hotye hein
    jaisay is ghazal ka last shair

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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    wah hemsha ki tarhan buhat he khoobsurat...
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    kiya kahnay hain zain jaani kiya baat hay tumhari...
    ik kiran mang kr wo aaftaab hogaiy..... mery khiyal se ye misra aisa hay kay is se aagay ghazal kiya parhi jaaiy... is misray ko sanbhal kr rakhna zain ji,,kuch share shanasi hay hamain,,ye her zuban zad e aam honay wala misra hay... kiya baat hay yaar
    tum khud is ghazal ko parho aik martaba meray kahnay se.... ye misra poori ghazal pr bhaari nazar aaiy ga...kiya kahnay hain yaar
    ik kiran maang kr wo aaftab hogaiy....wah wah..subhanAllah
    love thou - ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

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    wha all shair is good buhat umdha .......
    slip1mv7vb2vr9 - ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    aap sab ka bahot shukriya,
    aap tamaam doston ki muhabat qarz rahi,INSHA ALLAH jald hi fardan fardan reply karoon ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,)
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    too good!
    ranisrequest - ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........



    bht bht acha likha zain app nay

    2q0koia - ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

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