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    aj ki gazal

    Lafaz lafaz likhte ro raha houn
    Ghazal main aansu piro raha houn
    Qalam main khunjigar bhara hay
    Ghazal bhi khun se bhigo raha houn
    Mile hain muj ko yeh zakham kyunkar
    Ghamoon ki aandhi main jo raha houn
    Bas ab na chairo k magan houn
    Ghazal main zakhmon ko kho raha houn
    Sukoon pane k wasaste kuch
    Ghazal main khud ko dabo raha houn
    Na kuch bhi zahid zubani poucho
    Ghazal main har dukh samo raha houn

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    Default Re: aj ki gazal

    nice
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aryan View Post
    Lafaz lafaz likhte ro raha houn
    Ghazal main aansu piro raha houn
    Qalam main khunjigar bhara hay
    Ghazal bhi khun se bhigo raha houn
    Mile hain muj ko yeh zakham kyunkar
    Ghamoon ki aandhi main jo raha houn
    Bas ab na chairo k magan houn
    Ghazal main zakhmon ko kho raha houn
    Sukoon pane k wasaste kuch
    Ghazal main khud ko dabo raha houn
    Na kuch bhi zahid zubani poucho
    Ghazal main har dukh samo raha houn
    salaam Aryan,

    Ghazal nazar navaaz hui. achchhi koshish hai. mujeh pata to nai k shaa'ir kaun hai magar is Ghazal meN kuchh trans-literation, kuchh tikniki aur kuchh bahr/vazan kii kamii dar-pesh nazar aayii. nazar-e-saanii kar leN to behtar hogaa.

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    Default Re: aj ki gazal

    nice

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