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    Default ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    kesey mizaaj hain dosto?umeed hai bakheir honge,
    aek ghazal paish-e-khidmat hai,umeed hai pasand aaye gi,
    apni aara se zaroor nawaaziye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,


    ghazal6zindagimuhaalhaiaordiluda 1 - ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai
    Last edited by ishtiaq zain; 17-05-2008 at 11:07 PM.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    aik per me atak gaye

    dhondta tha bekhabar,raat kal jo admi

    kal raat jo admi nahi hona chahye tha kiya
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    aik per me atak gaye

    dhondta tha bekhabar,raat kal jo admi

    kal raat jo admi nahi hona chahye tha kiya
    us se misra wazn main naheen rehta
    majboori hai.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    leken is per zuban atak rahe hai
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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    leken is per zuban atak rahe hai
    to zubaan ko samjhao na

    shaairy main alfaaz ke heir pheir ki itni gunjaaish mil jaati hai,

    chalo is ki koyi aor soorat sochtaa hooN,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    waise ghazal mast hai
    leken iska kuch or sochain zara
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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    waise ghazal mast hai
    leken iska kuch or sochain zara
    soch liya,abhi edit karta hoon,phir batana,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    Walekam-Aslam
    Hamaray mizaj tou ALLAH(SWT) kay karam say khush bash hein
    Aap sunayein?
    Zabaradst kalam.......as usual!
    Bohat he acha aur sacha hai!

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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    wah jee uncle u ne tu change kardiya kiya baat hai ab sahe hai
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    Default Re: ghazal, zindagi muhaal hai,aor dil udaas hai

    kal jisay talash thi wala shair jo hai us ka matlab kaya hai

    wo me ko kuch samhj nahi aya


    baki ghazal mast hai or last shair main ap ki ghazal ki jaan hai...zaberdast..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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