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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    very nice sharing
    keep it up
    b happy

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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    thnnkss jia jee

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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    Quote Originally Posted by uzair View Post
    bewafaikargayasdog7 - Bewafai kar Gaya
    achhi koshish hai Uzair,
    mashq jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH behtari aaye gi kalaam maiN,
    do aek baatain aor bhi likh raha hoon,yaqeen hai ke aap mind naheen karain ge,

    aap ne pehley sheir ke pehley misrey main likhaa hai....judaayi kar gayi,..jo ke sahi naheen hai,asal muhaawara hai,..juda hona, yaa phir..judaayi denaa,....judaayi karna,sahi naheen hai,
    issi tarah se aakhari sheir ka doosara misra.....tanhaayi kar gayi,....tanhaahi di jaati hai,ya phir tanhaa kiya jaata hai,....tanhaayi karnaa sahi muhaawara naheen hai,
    so ho sakey to aek baar phir se dekh lijiye in ko,
    wazn ke hawaaley se bhi aap ki ghazal tawajah chaahati hai,lekin wazn to kheir musalsal mashq se behtar ho jaaye ga.so mashq kartey rahiye,agar mumkin ho to issi section main oopar aek mazmoon hai,shaairy seekhiye,us main hamain join kijiye,INSHA ALLAH maayoosi naheen ho gi aap ko,
    agar meri koyi baat buri lagi ho to us ke liye peishgi ma.azarat.
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    vry nice
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    nice try......

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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    achi likhi hai...
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Bewafai kar Gaya

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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    THANK YOU ALL FRINDS JI MEHRBANI ZAIN AAP KI THANKS JI
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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    very nice

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    Default Re: Bewafai kar Gaya

    bht acha likha hai app nay

    keep sharing vth us

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