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    Default Gazal " Mujhe sub Apne Gum Dedo"

    GAZAL SARA
    Agar Mujse Mohabbet hai Mujhe sub Apne Gum Dedo,
    In Aankhon ka Her Aanso Mujhe Meri Kasam Dedo..!
    Tumare Gum Ko Apna Gum Banalun To Karar Aaye,
    Tumara Dard Seene Main Chupalun to karar Aaye,
    Wo her Shaya jo Tume Sukh de Mujhe mere sanam Dedo..!
    Shareke Zindgi ko kyon Shareke Gum nahin kerte,
    Dukhon ko Baant ker kYon in Dukhon ko kem nahin Kerte,
    Taref is Dil Ki Thori See Mujhe Mere Sanam Dedo..!
    In Aakhon Mai na ab Mujhko kabhi Aason nazer Aaye,
    Sada Hansti Rahen Aakhen, Sada ye hot Muskayen,
    Muje Apni Saabhi Aanhain Sabhi Derdo Alam Dedo..!
    In aakhon ka her ek aanso mujhe meri kasam dedo..!

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    Zabardast
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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    Dear Sajid (ST) and Sheem, Hi Friends How U and Life. Thanks a lot for attending the Gazal and extending Daad on that. Sheem aapne Urdu main comments pesh kiye must be appropriate but Main urdu nahin read ker sekta. Aap urdu ke contents ka matlab batain. Ek problem ye ki main proper display of my threads nahin ker sakta and it is presented in paragraphs. For this i hav 2 plead Naz Madam, wo isko set karwati hain. She is a busy kind lady. Her baar unko kehna, Laaj ane lagi hai. Sky Angel ne kuch samjhaya tha per main follow in ker saka. Wo abhi available nahin hain. Can any of a U guide me .? Pl. do so. Thanks.

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    bhot umda likha hai Dixit sheem ne
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    bhot umda likha hai Dixit sheem ne

    Naz Mem, Hi ! How U nd ur routine. Thanks attending the Gazal, Mujhe Sub Apne Gum Dedo, keb aur kis nacheeze ko denge. Aap ne is gazal ki good setting and display kiya uske liye bhi tahe dil se Shukriya. Is jambeeh main ask-e-nadamet ke siwa kuch bhi nahin. Apne likha " Bahut umda likha hai Dixit Sheem ne." Bahut shukriya. Khudahafiz. gustakimaaf.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 16-10-2009 at 04:18 PM. Reason: Corrections

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