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    Default tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    ye tooti phooti ghazal aap kay zair e samaat,, mery gulab ki nazar


    alighazal - tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    buhat khoob

    buhat achi ghazal likhi hai

    keep writting

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    zaberdast janab
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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    ajnabi ho gia hon apnay leay
    jab say dunia say aashnai ki
    jis ko mill jay is qafans main sakoon
    kia tamana karay rihai ki
    waah kia hi khoob kahi
    kamal ka likha
    mukhtasar behar main
    likhna kamal e fun hay
    boht c daad qabool karain
    or isi tarah likhtay rahin

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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Heer*~ View Post
    buhat khoob

    buhat achi ghazal likhi hai

    keep writting
    boht shukriya,,kay aap nay adna si kawish ko pasand kiya.thnks

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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    zaberdast janab
    aap nay zabardast kaha ,bari baat hay,shukriya janab

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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    Quote Originally Posted by primitive View Post
    ajnabi ho gia hon apnay leay
    jab say dunia say aashnai ki
    jis ko mill jay is qafans main sakoon
    kia tamana karay rihai ki
    waah kia hi khoob kahi
    kamal ka likha
    mukhtasar behar main
    likhna kamal e fun hay
    boht c daad qabool karain
    or isi tarah likhtay rahin
    shukriya janab...aap itnay achay andaz main saraha hay kay,,shukriya kay liye alfaz moajood nahi hain....aik baar phir nawazish

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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    buhat khoob


    likhtay rahiye...
    SD ki Basanti

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    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Dua*~ View Post
    buhat khoob


    likhtay rahiye...
    boht shukriya,,Aap dua krti rahiye

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    Default Re: tum nay achcha kiya buraae ki

    wow nice poetry
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