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    I am dying

    I AM DYING

    Where did you go leaving me alone,
    giving me the pains which I do not own.

    Why did you broke my heart into two,
    without caring about me and listening me too.

    Why did not you try to understand my feelings, my love,
    just left me dumb with thousands of unsaid words.

    I feel so incomplete as you are not beside me,
    Just like the heart without the heart beats,
    Just like the body without soul,
    Just like the night without stars and moon.,
    Just like a ship with a hole.

    Please come back in my life,
    i have forgotten to live it without you.
    Come and hold my hand my beloved,
    as i am dying to meet you and love you
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    *~*~*~*ღ*~*~*~**~*~*~*ღ*~*~*~*

    2m4ccw6 - I am dying

    *~*~*~*ღ*~*~*~**~*~*~*ღ*~*~*~*

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    Please come back in my life,
    i have forgotten to live it without you.
    Come and hold my hand my beloved,
    as i am dying to meet you and love you.

    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Very Nice
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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    Hi Shaan,
    Very excelent poetry 'I am
    Dying" Well done. The last para of
    the poetry is heart touching and may
    wet the eyes if read it repeatedly.
    Please come back in my life,without
    you my life shattered. I am ready to
    sleep for ever, if you promise to
    appear in my dreams. I appreciate
    your effort of this poetry. Thanks.
    Bye .

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    I feel so incomplete as you are not beside me,
    Just like the heart without the heart beats,
    Just like the body without soul,
    Just like the night without stars and moon.,
    Just like a ship with a hole.



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