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    SHER O SHAYARI..

    Jahan tera nakshe kadam dekhtain hain
    Khiyaban Khiyaban Iram dekhte hain !

    Tiray surve qamat se, ik kadde- aadam
    Kayamet ke fitna ko kum dekhte hain.

    Tamasha kar ai mehve-aainadari Tujhe kis tamanna se hum dekhte hain.

    Banaker fakiron ka hum bhase'Najni'
    Tamasha-e-ahle-karam dekhte hain.

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    sharing
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Dear Aryan, Wah Wah Bahut khoob. Kamal ka shair pesh kiya.:' Tere dil ki dhakan mere dil ki jaan hai ' Lagta hai aap kafi tajurbkar hain. Shai o shayari ki pehchan hai. Aap gazal, nagma, nazam pesh kerte rahain. Well done. Ye mulaija phermai : "Afsos dil ka hal koi punchta nahin, Dil de to is mizaz ka Perver Digar de " Shuriya daad dene ka. Yahan to Pather dil bhi hain jinke koi asar hota hi nahin. Gudnite.

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    Naz, sada khush raho. Aapne apne he shair 'Jahan dekhte hain tere nakshe kadam dekhtain hain.' per daad na di sirf sharing. Urdu kyon jante ho hum nahin read. phir bhi. kya maja milta hai. really u r ruthless. (ab see dictiony.) Mai sare urdu walon ki print nikalwa ke Shamshu bhai se read karwa. Han han okay. dekhlenge. Khudahafiz.

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    Nice...
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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    very nice

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    khoob

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    Buhaat Khoob

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