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    SHER O SHAYARI

    Kitni Rahet hai Dil toot Jane ke Baad,
    Jindgi se Mile Maut aane ke baad.
    /morning
    Lajjate sajdaye derde dil kya
    karen
    Hosh hi keb raha Sir Jhukane ke Baad.

    Kya hua her Maserret gar chin gayi,
    Aadmi ban gaya Gum Uthane ke baad.

    Raat ka Majra Kis se poonchoo 'Shamim'
    Kya bani bazam pe mere aane ke bad.

    Zindgi se mile maut aane ke baad
    Kitne rahet hai Dil toot jane ke baad.

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    Wah Yaar Zabardast
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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    umda shairng.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    wah....zaberdast...
    great work

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    Hi Iqraar Miyan, Bahut shukriya hamari peshkash Gazl Shamim ahmed Shamim ki aapne read ki aur samjhi. Read kerne ke baad agar koi shair khyal main aaye to inayet ker diya karo. Aaj kuch Shairs pesh kiye hain. Pl read kerke batana. Shukriya.

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    Mohterma Naz, Bahut shukriya aapne Shamim saheb ki gazal " Kitne rahet hai dil Dukhne ke baad" read ki aur pasand ki uske liye Shukriya. Aaj kuch shairs pesh kiyen unhe bhi read kerke aap ke views batane ki meherbani kerna. Khudahafiz

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    Arsalan aur Sajid Miyan, Mera Salam kabool ho. Apne hamari pesh ki gazal read ker ke tarif ki uske liye shukriya. Shamim saheb ki hai mujhe bahut achi lagti hai. Kabhi mefil main taranum ke sath sunata hun. Shukriya.

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    Buhaat Khoob

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