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    snow *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    yeh tahreer meri nazam say he related hay...jo k main share kr chukki hoon..
    i hope app sab ko passand aa'ay ge...


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    Default Re: *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    uff
    great thinking
    bhot bhot acha
    main yeh hergiz nahi kahongi ke jia tumne bhot acha likha.
    likhte tu sub he hian..sachaye bhot kam log dikhate hian.
    bhot bhot acha laga mujhe...bhot zaida..
    comp main share karo na.
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    Default Re: *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    alwaida kehnay mein aap ka kasoor tha, bay-shak
    lekin jab woh shaksh koi jhooti tasali tak bhi nahi day sakta tha tou usay aap ka alvida kehnay bhi itna bura nahi lagna chaieye tha
    sari umar koi dosray kay gunah kay parday mein apni khud-garzi ko chupata raha
    musafir yeh tak naa jaan saka kay musafit adhori kyon hai

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    Default Re: *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    uff
    great thinking
    bhot bhot acha
    main yeh hergiz nahi kahongi ke jia tumne bhot acha likha.
    likhte tu sub he hian..sachaye bhot kam log dikhate hian.
    bhot bhot acha laga mujhe...bhot zaida..
    comp main share karo na.
    Thanx alot sis.....
    laikin com main mujhy samajh main nahi aa rha k main kia lagaoon ...kafi dinoon say yeh likh rakha tha or soch rahi the share karoon yaan rehny doon...mainy to socha tha rehny daiti hoon isay bs apny pass he save rakhti hoon...laikin phir mainy share kr he dia....
    passand krny ka bohat bohat shukriya

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    Default Re: *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    alwaida kehnay mein aap ka kasoor tha, bay-shak
    lekin jab woh shaksh koi jhooti tasali tak bhi nahi day sakta tha tou usay aap ka alvida kehnay bhi itna bura nahi lagna chaieye tha
    sari umar koi dosray kay gunah kay parday mein apni khud-garzi ko chupata raha
    musafir yeh tak naa jaan saka kay musafit adhori kyon hai
    usay dukh yeh nahi tha k mainy alwidaa keh dia usay dukh yeh tha k main baad main tnha reh jaoon ge us ka khiyal tha k main kisi or ko apna humsafar bnaa loon taa k us k baad woh mera khiyal rakh saky ...laikin shayed woh meri batoon ko samajhny ki bja'ay un ka ulta mtlb lay rha ho...khair yeh to mujhy bhi nahi pata k asal main usay dukh kis baat ka tha...jab kabhi milly to pooch krapp ko zaror btaoon ge
    just kidding...thanx alot 4 ur nice comments..

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    Default Re: *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    Quote Originally Posted by *~Cute Punjabi Girl~* View Post
    Thanx alot sis.....
    laikin com main mujhy samajh main nahi aa rha k main kia lagaoon ...kafi dinoon say yeh likh rakha tha or soch rahi the share karoon yaan rehny doon...mainy to socha tha rehny daiti hoon isay bs apny pass he save rakhti hoon...laikin phir mainy share kr he dia....
    passand krny ka bohat bohat shukriya
    nahi chanda share kiya karo....jab kuch karne ki selahiyat hia tu apna kiya sub ko dikhaya karo...
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    Default Re: *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    ok sis
    thanx alot

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    Default Re: *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

    beautiful........v..heart touching.......and innocent wordings.........thanks for the nice shairing
    "Oh Allah, Forgive my Sins and give me strength that

    I can stay on Siraat-al-Mustaqeem - Aameen"


    sachiiiidu7 - *~Alwidaa keh dia~*

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