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    cute Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

    Ban Jaon na Began-e-Aadabe-Mohabbat,
    Itna na karib aao, munasib hi yahi hai.

    Khamosh E dil, bhari mehfil main chillana nahin achha,
    Adab pehla karina hai, Mohabbat ke
    karinon main.


    ( Is shair per apni Daad inayet karain
    meherbani hogi)
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 10-02-2010 at 07:30 AM.

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    Default Re: Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

    nice

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    Default Re: Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

    kuch adhora sa shair lag raha hai.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

    Nice
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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    Default Re: Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

    Yes Naz, kuch kami hai per meaning
    nikala ja sekta hai. Thanks for pointing
    out the kami. Correct or add some word
    in it. Can U ? Oherwise 2maro i 'll do it.

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    Default Re: Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

    ini mushkil urdu
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

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    Default Re: Valentine: Mohabbat ka hi Naam

    Hi Rano,
    How U and your life these days.
    Shukriya, aapne shair read kiye aur
    commnts ke liye. Aji Sahiba, apke liye
    Urdu kya mushkil hai aap aur Appo to
    dono Super ho. Hai na. Thanks again.
    Khudahafiz.

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