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    snow Urdu Adab Competition March 10


    Asalam.o.ALaikum

    Yeh Aik Tasveer Hai..is pics ko daikh kar aap k kya ahsasat hain , aap kya sochte hain ya aap kahani ki shakal main apni feelings share karna chahay tu kar sakte hain , leken aik se 2 paragraph hon . chota leken jamay andaz main apne khayalat hum tak pohnchayen! or jo bhi likhain wo apka apna likha hua ho..kahe se liya hua nahi.


    23rjqs2 - Urdu Adab Competition March 10

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    1 ... Aik member aik he Paragraph Share Karsakta hai.

    2 ... Aik jaisa mat share kijeye ga.

    3 ... Comp ki last Date 21 March hai.

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    Default Re: Urdu Adab Competition March 10

    Hijab Sharing

    Mein aj bhi uni rahon mein khari hoon jahan per tum se bichri thi. Asman aaj bhi unhi siah udas badlon mein ghira hua hai jin mein us din ghira tha. Is rah ke shajar aaj bhi usi taran bain kertay hai, jaisay hamari judai ki ghariyon mein kiye thay.Mere haton mein tumhare pasandeeda safaid pholon ka guldasta bhi abhi tak nahi murjhaya. Is ki sehar-angaiz mehka se aaj bhi mera roum roum mehk raha hai. Mere hathon per tumhare haton ka lams aaj bhi zinda hai, jo pal pal mujhe tumhare honay ka pata deta hai.Jatay samay tum ne mere bhikray gesyon ko apnay hathon se sanwara tha. Meri ankhon se behtay ashkon ko apni ungliyon ki poro per puraya tha, aur kaha tha, "in ankhon mein anso mat anay dena, in mein mere khawab parona, meri yaad ke deep jalana, mere intizar kerna,".Aur mein aaj tak tumharelehjay ki ghambeerta aur tumhare lafzon ki chashni mein gum hoon.
    Mein tou yeh bhi bhool gaye hoon ke mere thikana kahan hai.Mujhe wapis bhi jana hai.

    Mujhe tou yeh ehsah tak nahi hota ke mera wajood bhikar raha hai.
    Mere ankhon se behtay askh manjmind ho gaye hein. Intizar ki shama
    bujh rahi hai, dharkan rukti jaa rahi hai. Yeh zalam hawa teri mehak
    bhi mujh se cheen rahi hai, mujhe bay-nishan ker rahi hai. Mujhe lamha
    lamha mar rahi hai.Mein tou aaj bhi uni lafzon mein khoye hoon, jo tum ne mujh se kahay thay.Faqt usi jumlay mein uljhi hoon, jo akhri baar tum ne apnay labon
    se nahi apni ankhon se kaha tha aur woh meri rooh mein utra tha.
    "Mein tum se bichar raha hoon, juda nahi ho raha, mera intizar
    kerna!"

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    Default Re: Urdu Adab Competition March 10

    NICE felLinG

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    Default Re: Urdu Adab Competition March 10

    sapno ki in galiyoon mein khoo janya ko dil ker raha hai
    zindagi hum sya khfa hai phir bhi iss ko mananya ko dil ker raha hai
    jab bhi in rahoon ko dekhti hoon
    kuch pa janya ka ehsas hota
    ore jism ko cho ker guzarnya wali hawa
    uss kiya sath guzarya howay har paal ka ehsas karti hai
    kabhi to loot ker aao giya yeh dil kehta hai
    lagta hai inhi rahoon ko dekhtya hamri jane nikal jani hai


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    Default Re: Urdu Adab Competition March 10

    bohat acha likha hai Ben
    thnks api for posting mine's

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    Default Re: Urdu Adab Competition March 10

    Mere Mehboob tum se bichhar kr rangeen mausam b khofanak ho gia hai,
    wohi hn badal whi hn rahen,whi hai mausam,mgr gr tum nai ho to sub veran hai..
    mujh birhan k sath badal b tum se judai k dukh me matmi (siah)ho gaye hn,
    rahen b veran ho gai hn,mere veran dil ki tarah.
    heer khushi mujhe dasti hai,
    her mehfal se bhagti hu,
    her rangeeni buri lagti hai,
    daikho her rah,her badal,ye nazare,ye phool pode,ye sabza,sub pukar pukar kr mujh se phooch rhe hn k tumhara sajan kab aye ga?kab tum muskrao gay?kab tum hamare sang phir se khilkhilao gay?hum taras gaye tumhari hansi daikhne ko,hum her roz tumhare sajan k ane ki dua krte hn,
    main kuch nai keh pati...bus khali nazron se in khali rahon me kharri dekhe jati hun...
    dil he dil me amen kehti rhti hun...
    23rjqs2 - Urdu Adab Competition March 10
    Last edited by Ruby Ahmed; 07-03-2010 at 09:44 PM.

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    Default Re: Urdu Adab Competition March 10

    Kia koe yu bhee juda hoa ho ga...! us ki har ada sab se alag the mujhai yaad hai jub woh mare zindagi main aaya tha to kitne rang the mujhai yaad hai tum ne mujhai Laal rang k bohat sare gulaab dea thay laal rang jo pyar ka rang hai to aaj...to aaj pher yeh tum ne mujhai phool dea hai lakin in pholoon ka rang ......in ka rang kahan gaya yeh to sufaaid hai to kia..tumhari chahat bhee khatam ho gae mare kaan tumhari awaz sun rae hain mare aankhain tumhare laboon ko dekh eahe hain jo humari judai ka elan kar rae hai lakin mujhai yaqeen q nae...han mujhai tumhari aankho per yaqeen hai jin main hamesha mare muhabbat the lakin aaj.....aaj tumhari aankhain bilkul khali hain kahan gaay sab payar?
    Bas ab main un rahoo per bilkul tanha hoon jahan kabhee tumhare saath the aaj yeh rasta kitna weraan hai mare dil ki tarha yeh parenday ghar laout rahay hain aur main ...mare to manzil he khoo gae ...........
    main akaile tanhaa sadyoo k safar main apni manzil ki talash main hoon.........
    Last edited by insh; 08-03-2010 at 08:34 PM.
    rain?t1311176404 - Urdu Adab Competition March 10


    Yaad Teri Orh Ker Main So Gaya
    Khawab Ka Der Khul Gaya Barish Ke Baad

    Chand Dekh Ker Badloon Ki Qaid Main
    Ik Sitara Ro Deya Barish Ke Baad




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    Default Re: Urdu Adab Competition March 10

    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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