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    cute " Kaun jeeta hai teri Julf ke Sir hone tek"

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    Aah ko chahie ek umra aser hone tek,
    kaun jeeta hai teri julf ke sir hone tek.


    Aashqi sabra taleb aur tamanna betaab
    dil ka kya rang karun khoone jiger hone tek.

    Humne maana ki tagaful na karoge, lekin,
    khaak hojaynge hum, tumko khaber hone tek.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 21-02-2010 at 08:17 PM. Reason: correction

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    Default Re: " Kaun jeeta hai teri Julf ke Sir hone tek"

    nice sharing
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: " Kaun jeeta hai teri Julf ke Sir hone tek"

    wah g wah
    kia khub kaha

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    Default Re: " Kaun jeeta hai teri Julf ke Sir hone tek"

    Shukriya Naz, aapne ye ek Gazal ke
    teen shers read kiye aur achi daad di.
    Kuch dil ko tasalli na hui. Itne maqbool
    shers SD ke doston ne lagta hai pasand
    na kiye . Chalo itni to rahet mili ki aapne
    pasand kiye that means sare jahan ne
    approve kiya. Khudahafiz.

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    Default Re: " Kaun jeeta hai teri Julf ke Sir hone tek"

    Hi SK, thannks for appreciating the
    shers presented by me and offered
    dilkhush daad to me. So nice of U.
    U R at Bahrain. all the best.

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