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    salam friendz...i m nausheen,..here i m new n sharing my first verse with all of u...hope u must like it...
    thanks...

    Suno rah-e-Mohabbat main safar kartey to acha thaa
    Hamarey saath ae jana jo tum chaltey to acha thaa

    Tumhari behissi ney chean li shadabiyan mujh sey
    Meri masoom chahat ka bharam rakhtey to acha thaa

    Baharon main gulon ko dekh kar dil doob jata hai
    Khizan rut main bhi ae humdum jo ye khiltey to acha thaa

    Ye kya k aaj bhi merey habeebon main kharey ho tum
    Mujhey ab key raqeebon main agar miltey to acha thaa

    Tumhey behka diya hai is jahan ney ae mere humdum
    Ye dunya chor kar jana,meri suntey to achaa thaa

    Kyun barson baad terey hijr main marney lagey hain hum??
    jahan par saath chora tha wahiin martey to acha thaa

    Hazaron zakham hain jo ab chupaye sey nahi chupptey
    Ye gehrey ghao ulfat k agar siltey to acha thaa...

    (NOSH)





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    Default Re: *~* Acha tha*~* My Own Verse...

    wah ji zabardast
    maza aa giya
    keep sharing


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    Default Re: *~* Acha tha*~* My Own Verse...

    Thanks Alot...
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    Default Re: *~* Acha tha*~* My Own Verse...

    Walekum Salam


    Kyun barson baad terey hijr main marney lagey hain hum??
    jahan par saath chora tha wahiin martey to acha thaa

    Hazaron zakham hain jo ab chupaye sey nahi chupptey
    Ye gehrey ghao ulfat k agar siltey to acha thaa...

    Its Awesome Noshi

    Bohot Zabardast Likha Hai

    Khush Rahein Keep Sharing
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mohammad Sajid View Post
    Walekum Salam





    Its Awesome Noshi

    Bohot Zabardast Likha Hai

    Khush Rahein Keep Sharing
    thanks for ur appreciation.../belan
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    bhot achi sharing hia
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerry View Post

    bhot achi sharing hia
    Thanks....
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    Bohat Khoob

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    Thanks Alot...
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    Default Re: *~* Acha tha*~* My Own Verse...

    Walikum-u-salam

    Buhat khoob likha
    PAKISTAN Eik ISHQ Eik JANOON

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