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    snow Polling 4 Writers Competition July 2010



    yeh pic de gaye thi jis per likhne ko kha gaya tha.

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    Thaam Lo Haath Mera

    Waqat aur halaat k es dhoop chao k khail main mayoosion se lipat ker main jab bebas hoker roo rahi thi k main apni mohbbat ka saath do ya dunya walon ka ya papa ka tu tum ne aker mere ansoo apney haathon se ponch ker kaha apna haath mere haath main de do aur bas thaam lo haath mera ye meri himmat meri taqat hai es haath main es haath ko thaam ker mehsoos karo aur chup hojao tum kaya samjhti ho mujhey tumhara ehsaas nahi hai nahi ayesa nahi hai sana mujhy tumhra ehsaas hai mere dil main bhi tumhrey liye jazbaat hai main khood ko rook na saka chhaton k saillab ubher gai hai mohbbat ki lao jal uthi hai main bhi tum se bhut pyaar kerta ho mere ansoo usne apney haathon se ponch ker meri dubti howi kashti ko jaisey sahara de diya ho mera haath apney haath main thaam ker jaise usne tufaano se lerney ki taqat mujhye soonp di ho zindagi ki raah kaanton bhari ho ya pholon se saji ho khushi miley ya gham kaya farq parhta hai jab tumhara haath mere haath main hai tu mujhey andheron se bhi raoshni mil rahi hai fir usne kaha kaya tum mujh se shadi karongi main bhut greeb ho mere paas koi kaam bhi nahi hai mana k main greeb ho mager mohbbat se tumhara daman kabhi khali nahi rehney donga mana k ye daoulat hamrey beech diwaar banker khadi hai mager main hmaesha tumhara saath ho zalim dunya k log hamey hargiz milney nahi denge mager tum apna khud ko bikhrney na ya tutney na dena mera yaqeen karo pehli bar main es tarh laot k aya ho ab tu mujhy rook lo mera gala khushk honey laga aur main ney rotey howe uska haath thaam liya aur usne mujhey galey se laga ker eak pal main sarey ghamon ko khushi main tabdeel ker diya saari uljhano ko door ker diya saarey sawaalon k jawaab de diya aur meri bebasi ko haousla aur mohbbat ko uska haq deker kayi ahed wafa k wadon main mujhye bandh ker fir milny ka wada kerkey ho chala gaya.....

    Uske haath se mere haath tak ka jo tha fasla eak umeed ban gaya apno se begano se dunya se samaj se waqat ki kathing azmayish se lerney ka housla de gaya tumhra haath thaam ker tu main ne zindagi ko samjha aur fir un haseen yadon k saath waqat kayi maousamon main badal gaya tu main ne achnak akhbaar main dekha k use chars k case main saath saal ki jai hogayi hai mujhy kuch samjh main nahi aya k majra kaya hai ? main us se milney k liye nikla hi rahi thi k papa ne mujhey rook liye k kis se milney ja rahi ho woh eak mujrim hai wo lerka tere qabil nahi hai pehley bhi kayi baar main ne mana kiya fir bhi tum log baaz na aaye uska khyaal ab dil se nikaal dey use bhool ja hamesha k liye .....

    mera dil gawara nahi kera raha tha asfaq ayesa nahi ker sakta zaroor koi bat hai per main us waqat bebas thi papa ne saaf saaf kah diya tha k ya use ya mujhye dono main se eak ko choon lo main ajeeb kashmakash se guzer rahi thi k kis ka saath do mujhye yaqeen tha wo ayesa nahi ker sakta uski yaadon main udaas khuda se es masley ka hal aur ensaaf maagti rahi ALLAH Tallah ne meri soon li aur main ne papa ko phoon per baat kerty soon li k kis tarh mujh se door kerney k qasad se use zaberdasti chars k jhootey case ka elzaam laga ker 7 saal jail kerwayi hai....

    mai hayerat asfaaq ki halat per roney lagi k meri waja se eak begunah ko saza mil rahi hai main sab kuch bhola ker cheekti lerzti ehsaas se lerti howi apney papa ki baaton ko raound ker apni mohbbat ko dil ki rooh se samjh ker main daouri uske paas chali gayi jaha woh jail ki salakhon k pichey sirf mera hi intezaar ker raha tha k kab main aao aur us se ye kah do k tum begunah ho woh ayesa kaam kabhi nahi ker sakta woh beqasoor hai.....

    Main ne jatey hi uska haath thaam liya kaya howa ger ye salaakhein hamrey beech hai uski aankho main ansoo thy wo kuch kehna cha raha tha k main ne uske moo per haath rakh diya aur koshish kerkey uskey ansoo pochein aur us se kaha ab kuch na kaho main sab janti ho mere haath main apna haath de do thaam lo haath mera tumhe haousla mil jaiga kaya howa ye salakhein hai dermiyan main main tumhrey saath ho hmaesha se kaya howa ye zalim dunya hamrey pyaar k khilaaf hogayi hai hamey alg kerna chati hai main sach ka saath dongi kiuyn k such main janti ho aur ALLAH ne hamey hamesha such ki raah per chalney ki hidayt di hai tu main gawahi dongi papa k khilaaf main ne unki awaaz record kerli hai apney cell main k kis tarh unhoney ye sab kerwaya meri duwaaon main taseer thi asfaaq esi liye ALLAH ne hamri madad ki dekho tum preshaan na hona ab ye haath thaam ker mujhye saari umer dukh ho ya sukh tumhrey saath chlna hai dunya aur halaat bhaley kitni bhi diqqatein kiuyn na laye tumhrey haath jab mere haath main hai tu main saarey zamaney se lard longi mere papa hi kiuyn na ho main such ka saath dongi tumhey en salakhon se nikalongi aur fir ham miker her halaat ka samna kareygey mohbbat k beech ayi gayi ye banaouti daolat sache pyaar aur mazboot eradon ko kabhi kamzour nahi kareygi main ne mazboti se uska haath jab thama tu use bhi zindagi ka maqsad aur salkhon ki qaid main bhi apni rehayi ka faisla meri ankhon main dekhney laga hamrey liye eak dosrey ko samjhna aur mushkion main eak dosrey ka haath thamna hi hamari mohbbat ki jeet thi aur akhir kar daolat k tarzo main mohbbat rakhney waley bhi haar gai aur eak greeb k sachye pyaar ki jeet howi aur papa bhi maan gai aur ham dono hamesha k liye zindagi k safer main mohbbat se eak dosrey ka haath thamey agey badtey rahey na usne kabhi maushkion main mera haath chora na main ne uska her dukh takleef aur mushkilon ka saamna ham ney milker kerna hai main ho tumhri taqat aur himmat aur tum meri esi liye ye haath kabhi na chorna tumhari her mushkelin asaan ho jaigi bas Tum Thaam Lo Haath Mera .......

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    Mishaal


    MOHABBAT NE MOHABBAT KO PUKARA HAI !
    ‘’Usey Meri judayi buhut dukh deti THi ! ‘’‘’Woh kehti thi ke tumhare bina meri zindagi ke koi Maani nahiin hain; tumse door ho ker main Jeetey ji Mar jaongi..Tumhein nahiin pata ‘’Aliyaan ‘’ tum tu meri rooh mein baste ho ager kisi se uski rooh cheen li jaye tu who Zinda kese rahe ga??’’Aur main uski baton per usey bas dekh ker reh jata tha.Kitni deewani thi na??Mein jab bhi us se Judaayi ki baatein kerta tu who aik dam ro Parti thi..Uski jheel si ankhon main shafaaf moti dekh ker main khud ko kosta aur usey mananey main lag jata tha………Magar Shayad hum nahiin jante the ke kabhi kabhi Zabaan se nikalne wali baatein bhi sach ban ker humare samne aker khari ho jati hain…Humein Kya pata tha ke mazak main judayi ki baatein kertey aik din hum Judaa ho jaye ge ! Agar pata hota tu main kabhi aisi baatein nahiin kerta ..Mujhe Aaj bhi yaad hai who humari Judaayi ke samey kis tarhaan Toot Ker Bikhri Thi….Mein Usey yeh dukh Nahiin dena Chahta tha magar …… uski bhalayi aur uske Khandaan ki Izzat-o-Waqaar ka bhi Ilm Tha mUjhe !Maine Kabhi usey hurt nahiin kerna Chaha Tha magar Nadanstgi main Usey itna bara Dukh De betha ! Magar yeh tu hona hi Tha ..Shayad….Humari Qismat main yahi likha tha…….‘’Mere Uske Ghar proposal bhejne se pehle hi us Per Yeh InkiShaafPahaar Ban Ker gira ke Uske Walid Uska rishta Bachpan Main Hi Uske Tayazaad ‘’Zaviyaar’’ Se tey ker Chuke Hain…………! ‘’Uskey Walid Apni Zubaan ke Pakey Hain yeh who bhi janti thi……Aur usey yeh bhi pata tha ke ager woh baghawat kerna bhi chahe tu uske Walid kabhi bhi nahiin maney ge………Usey Apne Abba jaan Se buhut Pyaar tha…magar who pagli larki…Mujhe se bhi buhut Pyaar kerti thi,aur aj apne Walid se shaaki thi keUski Zindagi ka faisla Uski merzi janey baghair ker diya gaya..!Kitni Asaani se Us se keh diya gaya ke Kuch mahinon Baad tumhari shaadi hai. Kashi Usey pata hota ke who bachpan se kisi se mansoob hai tab shayad……….Shayad humari Mohabbat ka koi Wajood na hotaAur yeh Judayi ki aziyat tu na sehni parti………Kaash !Aur woh pagal larki !Aaj meri khatir Baghawat kerne apne walid ke samne kharey hone ki bat na kehti..woh mujhse itni shadeed Mohabbat kerti hai Mujhe Iska andaza nahiin tha..aur us deewani larki ki Mohabbat ka andaza tu mujhe uske Bicharne ke baad hua !Woh komal si nazuk si lerki..main usey bachana chahta tha..us aik ghalat faisley se jo usey uske apno se buhut door le jata..Us barbaadi ke raste se apno ka aitebaar khoney se..Apno ko dukh dena unki naraazi sehna kya hota hai..yeh main janta hun..Magar shayad Usko is bata ka idraak bilkul nahiin tha.Tab ! ........ haan tab maine Khator ban ker usko apna faisla suna diya Usey chor dene ka faisla.. Aur yeh faisla sunate Main us se nazrein Mila hi na saka,usne mujhe kis dukh kis aziyat se dekha tha...Usey Judayi ki saza sunaney wala main tha..mujhe aj tak apne faisley per yaqeen nahiin aya..kitna pathar dil ho gaya tha na main???Magar shayad woh jaan sakti Us se kahiin zyada aziyat main mein tha(Uske khayal main main pathar dil hoon na) Haan main ..Mujhe lag raha tha..Jaise dunia ki har shey Sooog mana rahi hai..Matam ho rahe hain..dunia se jaise sarey rang mar gaye ho..Har manzar..har manzar pheeka ho gaya tha.............Main usey kya sambhalta main khud bhi tu bikhar raha tha..........toot raha tha...........!Woh janey ko muri thi..khali haath..tahi damaan..kuch bhi tu na raha tha uske paas....Main dil main uthtey dard ke toofaan ko daba ker usey apna America ka contact number dekar bas itna hi keh saka...:‘’ TOOBA !Zindagi ke kisi mor per tum khud ko tanha pao meri madad ki zarorat ho dunia agar tumhein akela ker de tu mujhe Pukaar lena..Main tumhari aik pukaar per ajaonga...Apna khayaal rakkhna..Nayi Zindagi Mubarak ho..ALLAH Hafiz.......’’Woh ruki nahiin woh humesha ke liye chali gayi..usne mujhe mur ker dekha bhi nahiin..kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta ahi usne meri akhri baat suni hi nahiin thi... Barasti barish ki tarhaan uski ankhein bhi baras rahi thi...uski jheel si ankhon Mein Terte Ansoo mujhse bhala kahan chupe the??Aur.........phir woh chali gayi shayad Mohabbat kerne walon ke saath Aisa hi hota hai..Mohabbat kerna tu buhut Asaan hota ahi magar usko nibhana us se kahi zyada mushkil..Aur maine tu apne hathon se apni mohabbat ko khoo diya..........main mohabbat ko nibha hi na saka ke mujhe tooba ke liye zindagi ki rahon ko asaan banana tha..main usey kisi mushkil main nahiin daalna chahta tha...Main America janey ki tayariyon main laga tha..Karachi Saari Ronaqein Mujhe ab pheeki lagne lagne lagi thi..Mein jo yeh kaha kerta tha ke (City Of Light ! Meri jaan hai aurMain mar ker bhi isey nahiin chor sakta...) Aaj… Usko chor Ker Ja raha tha..!Aur Dusri taraf Uski Shaadi ki tayarriyaan Urooj per thein….magar kisi ne Uski Adam Dilchaspi ko Mehsoos hi nahiin kiyaWho din badan Murjhati jarahi hai..Kisi ne mehsoos hi nahiin kiya.. Shayad sab Yahi soch ker Khamosh the..ke agley ghar jane aur yeh ghar chor janey ke khayaal se Afsurda hai……. Halanke ‘’Amma Ji’’ Uski Walidah ne Apne Paas bitha ker kitne pyaar se samjhaya bhi tha..:‘’Ke Dekho beta aik na aik dil tu babul ka aangan chorna hi perta hai lerki ka asal ghar uska sasural hota hai…..betiyaan tu angan ke churiyaan hoti hain..jo waqt aney per ur jaati hain apne asal ghar ki taraf..……..Meri jana tum pareshaan na ho aur wese bhi taya ke ghar ja rahi ho kuch bhi ajnabi na hoga.. !Aur who tu bas muskura ker reh gayi… Kya batati ke amma ji mera dil kyun pareshaan hai..mere dil ki dunia hi ujar gayi hai..Amma ji apke angan ki churayi mar jaye gi ..Amma ji usey Bacha lein……..!!!Aur yeh saari batein mujhe Sania se se pata chali ……haan Sania !Uski behen…….Aik wahi tu thi jo meri aur tooba ki Mohabbat se Agha…wahi tu thi jo buhut shru se humare barey main janti thi aik wahi tu humari raazdaar thi..Tooba sania se hi tu apne dil ki baatein kia kerti thi..magar aj who sarey dukh apne dil main chupaye bethi thi usne saani se bhi kuch na kaha.. aur sania bechari us se zyada kar bhi kya sakti hai..woh chah ker bhi kuch kerne se qasir hai…aur Main us se barabar tooba ka khayaal rakhne ka kehta raha hoon..magar mujhe kya khabar thi ke who andar hi andar khatam ho rahi hai…‘’Jis Din uski shaadi thi…..mein usi raat Us mulk se tamaam rabitey khatam ker ke America chala aya..Aur ab mera waahn reh bhi kya gaya tha?? Sab kuch tu haar aya tha..wahan chand doston ke siwa poochne wala koi tha bhi nahiin jin ko maine tal diya..Mummy daddy pehle hi yahan settle the..mere faisley per woh buhut khush huye…Main tu uski yaad bhulane yhan chala aya tha..magar who thi ke yaad aye chali ja rahi thi...mujhe kya pata tha ke apna dil bhi wahiin kahiin chor aya hun..Aaj uski shhadi hai yeh soch soch ker meri ankhon main mirchein bhari ja rahi thein.. Kis ko batata mere saath kya hua ahi???Mere dil ki duniya kesay ujar nahii hai…??Mujhe us deewani larki ka khayaal araha tha..woh kis aziyat main hogi..uske ansoo itni door bethe hhi mujhe apne dil per girte mehsoos ho rahe the………..………………………………………………………………………………4 years later !4 saal beet gaye…….Yeh 4 saal kese beet gaye..kesay maine khud ko sameta yeh main hi janta hun.!!Main Aaj aik kamiyaab business man hun..mere Hotels ki Keychains hain..buhut kuch Badal gaya hai………..Daddy ab nahiin rahe …………..Yeh hawayein Yeh fizayein meri soch……….. meri Dressing ...Mera hasna bolna sab kuch badal gaya hai………….Zindagi main buhut se badlao aye hainNahiin badla hai tu who mausam hai ka mausam……….. Mera dil aaj bhi ‘’toba’’ ke liye Dharakta hai..Rukiye !! Door Bell Baj rahi hai..............Darwaza kholne per Post man Ki shakal nazar ayi…Ufff !!Aaj phir kisi Bussiness dinner ka invitation agaya !!Maine Bezaari se woh safaid lifafa table per daal diya…..aur bahar jane ke liye qadam barhaye hi the ke Aika ik Meri Nazrein Lifafey pr likhi Ibarat Per pari…‘’Aliyaan Zaidi ke liye Tooba Ki taraf Se ‘’Uske likhne ka yeh Makhsoos andaaz main kesay bhool sakta hun??Kya aaj uusey meri zarorat hai???4saal kam tu nahiin hote???Un 4 saalon main koi aik pal aisa nahiin guzra jab maine usey yaad na kiya ho..woh komal se larki bhi kabhi bhulaye janey ke qabil hai?? Mujhe lagta hai main kabhii us se juda hua hi nahiin....Maine Betaabi se Woh Khat Khola ..Jaise jaise Main Khat Perhta ja raha tha Mere chehre ki rangat badalti ja rahi thi..Yeh Tooba ki zindagi ke beete un 4 salon ki daastan thi jo usne mere baghair guzare...aur agle lamhe Main apne Pakistan jane Ke liye Seat book Karwa raha tha.........Mehendi Lagane Ki raat AyiDoli sajane ki raat ayi........!!!Tooba ki Behnein aur saheliyaan geet ga rahi hain,aaj meri aur tooba Ki Mehendi jo hai...................Ab aap sochein ge yeh kesay mumkin hai ?? jab ke tooba ki shaadi Ho chuki hai........Tooba aur Aaliyaan Juda Ho chuke the phir achanak yeh sab???Theheriye, aise apko samajh nahiin ayegi..main apko Us khat ke barey main Sab kuch batata hun.................‘’Tooba Ne shaadi ke baad khud ko kafi had tak sambhal liye thaJis main zyaaada tar hath uske shohar zaviyaar ka tha...tooba ne zindagi se Samjhota ker liya tha(Taham woh mujhe bholi nahiin thi....Laiken Qismat ko uska sambhalna bhi raas na aya..Tooba Ki shaadi ke sirf 2 mahine baad uske Shohar ki aik road accident main death ho gayi..!!Tooba per yeh sadma pahaar ban kar toot,abhi tu nayi zndagi Shru bhi nahiin hui thi ke yeh sab ho gaya..Phir buhut kuch sangeen hua..Tooba ka shaded qisam ka nervous breakdown ho gaya !Uski tayi ne uski mahoos aur sabz qadam qaraar de diya !Abba jaan usey wapas ghar le aye………Woh kamini si larki Jo choti si takleef Per bhi balak uthti thi..Itna bara sadma seh na saki..Oper se pe dar pe sadmat ne usey tor diya…Aur who In halon main pohanch gayi ke uska Nervous break down ho gaya !!Main is sab ka zimeydaar bhi khud hi ko theheraonga..main hi tu tha..jiski waja se who in halon main thi…‘’Zaviyaar’’ (tooba ka shohar) ki moat ke baad..uski taayi ne usey manhoos mashoor ker diya.. taayi ko iklotey betey ki moat ka buhut gehra sadma tha aur uska zimeydara who tooba ke unke ghar per perne waley sabz qadmon ko thehra rahi thein...’’Tooba chup chaap sab sunti rahi..Abba jaan halaat ko qaboo main na atey dekh usey wapas ghar le aye the…Yeh sab buhut takleef deh tha who roz jeeti roz mar rahi thi…..Phir usey sambhalne main buhut sa waqt lag gaya…Usne dil se hasna chor diya tha who babul ke angan mena !Ab bilkul chup ho gayi thi ..Amma jaan aur abba jaan pareshaan nah on is liye bilawaja unki baton per muskurati rehti thi..magar kya who anjaan the uske dukh se..yeh aur baat ke who usey usper kuch kehte na the..ke kahiin uske zakham harey na ho jaye…Usne University main apne Pasandeedah mazmoon main admission le liya tha…………Abhi uska first semester bhi tamaam na hua tha ke taya jaan ne Apne Chotey bete aur tooba ke devar ka Proposal Tooba ke liye agey ker diya..!!Chonke Unka Bara beta nahiin raha tha..tu tooba ka wahan rehne ka koi jawaaz nahiin tha..woh tooba ko betiyon ki tarhana chahte the,shayad is liye bhi ke unki koi beti nahiin thi sarey armaan unhone sania aur tooba per hi poore kiye the…aur tooba tu thi bhi sab ki ladli ..uski ujri zindagi dekh ker aur yeh soch ker ke Tooba ke naam ke saath jo dhaba lag gaya hai..usey jan’nay ke baad koi maaqool rishta ata bhi hai ya nahiin..Us dar ke pesh-e- nazar unhone Chotey betay ka rishta daal diya…….Jiski tayi jaan Pur zor mukhalifat ker rahi thein…….Taya jaan aur tayi jaan main iS baat ko le kar Jhagre honey lage they..tayi jaan ka khayal tha ke tooba unke aik betay ko unse cheen chuki hai aur woh dusra beta khona nahiin chahti..Jab ke taya jaan ka khayaal tha tayi jaan ke khudshey be buniyaad hain…….Is baar tu Abba jana bhi Is rishtey ke Khilaaf the…. Kyunke Unka yeh batija Tooba se 4,5 saal chota tha magar who baap the…Kya kerte??? Beti Ki ujri halat Kesay dekhtey??/ Unhone Tooba ke samne yeh maamla rakh diya Aur uska andiyah lena chaha !Tooba ki ankhon main Baap ke sawaal per hairat hi hairat thi UskiAnkhon main hairaani Dekh kar aik lehaz ko Unhein apne faisley aur soch par buhutb afsos hua,Phir who Tooba ke sar per shafqat bhara haath rakh ker chale gaye…Tooba abba jaan ke maan rakh lene Per buhut khush thi, uski ankhon mein aaj baap ke liye Mohabbat Chalak rahithi Bilkul wesi mohabbat Jesi woh Shaadi se pehle Abba jaan se kiya kerti thi…Woh Bap ki pareshaani ko samajh gayi thi Usne Apni Amma jaan se Mera Zikar ker diya..Sab kuch jaan lene ke baad Amma jaan ne Be ikhtiyaar uski peshani choom ker buhut si duaayein de daalein…..woh itni sabir beti thui unki..unhein aj tak pata na chala..unki beti itna sab kuch sehti rahi aur unko khaber hi na hui..Woh dukh aur tasuf Ke miley juley Lehjey main Goya huyein:‘’beta tu ne Humein Batay kyun nahiin??Tu ander hi ander ghulti rahi aur hum teri shaadi ka jashan manate rahe..tu khush nahiin thi tu kiya tujhe na khush dekh ker hum khush reh saktey the ?? beta aik baar tu tere Abba jaan se kehti......Kya pata tha bitiya ! tu sirf baap ka maan rakhne ki khatir apne aap ko bhent charha rahi hai...tera khyaal tha ke tere Abba jana nahiin maney ge ???tu beta mujhe aik koshish tu kerne deti .. ! ‘’‘’Amma jaan ! Mein Abba jaan ko buhut achi tarhaan janti hun aur aap bhi achi tarhan janti hain ke Abba Kitne Pakkey hain apni zubaan ke ! Phir main Unko Sab ke Samney Sharmindah kese hone deti ? So maine unka Maan rakh liya..Betiyaan tu Walidein ka Maan Hoti hain na Amma jaan !Apne Hi tu Mujhe Seekhaya hai ! Usne apne chehre per aik dheemi si muskaan saja ker Jawaab Diya !Meri Pyari Bachi ! Amma Jaan Ne Usey Apne Saath Laga liya..Bahar kHare Abba Ne Apni ankhon mein aye Ansoo ponche..Unhein apni beti per buhut naaz hua..Woh beti jisne unka maan rakh liya..aur aaj unhein apni beti ka maan rakhna hai……Woh Muskura ker agey Barh gaye…………….. Phir Agey ke Marahil khud ba khud tey hotey chaley gaye..Tooba Ka Khat milte Hi main pehli flight se chala aya..mummy daddy ko meri pasand per koi aiteraaz nahiin tha woh tooba se meri wabstgi ke barey main buhut pehle se jante the..aur mere dukh se bhi aashna the..unke liye yahi buhut khushi ki baat thi e unka beta shaadi ke liye raazi ho gaya hai..******************************************* **************************Aur aaj humari mehendi ki rasm Ikhtitaam pazeer hui…ghar jatey hi pehla phone maine Us dewani si larki ko kiya tha..Jo mujhe buhut Pyari hai ! Aur bilashubha aaj peelay dopattey ke haley main who buhut masoom aur pyari lag rahi thi….aur kyun na lagti??Uske haath main mere naam ki mehendi jo lag rahi thi..‘’Hello ! kya main Miss Tooba Aliyaan Zaidi se baat ker sakta hoon??? Maine usey tang kern eke khyaal se kaha !Sorry wrong Number !!Yahan koi Miss Tooba Aliyaan Zaidi nahiin rehtiUsne bhi mera mazaaq samajh ker har lafz chaba chaba ker ada kiya aur naraazi se phone band kerne lagi..Uske Agley qadam ki bhanak partey hi maine Pentra badal liya; Arey baba ! Em Sorry phone Mat rakhna Tumhein tu pata hai na Mujhe mazaq kerne ki Adat hai ab ke mera anadaaz minat kerne wala tha…Mere Us Andaaz per woh khilkhila ker hans pari..Bilkul wesi shafaaf hansi jo un dino hua kerti thi jab hum saath the…Tumhein Pata hai Tooba ! Aj main buhut khush hoon ! Kyun? Usne Hiaraani se poocha‘’Aaj tumhari khoyi hui pyari si smile jo Wapis Agayi hai ! ‘’Maine Ghambher lehje main kaha.‘’Aur main is liye Khush hoon……..Key Aj Mujhe Apka Saath Wapas Mil gaya Hai..Aap nahiin jante Ke Maine kitni Takleef kitni aziyat sahi hai..Aap jante the na muhe apki doori kitni takleef deti hai?? Phir bhi apne mera sath chor diya ?? main janti hun ke apne jo kia uska pas-e-manzar kiya tha..magar is dil ka kya kerti Aliyaan ???Is Doori ko buhut bardaasht ker liya ab aur nahiin.. Sehna 1 Mujhse wada karein Mujhe Chor ker kabhi nahiin jaye ge’’....Usne Fikermand lehje main mujhse wada liya...‘’Waada’’ ! Maine uski ik ik ada per nisaar hote hua kaha...‘’4 saal ! Aliyaan ! in 4 saalon main mein jis takleef se guzri hun shayad hi kabhi itni takleef sahi ho Amma Jaan Abba jaan ne kabhi takleef ka matlab jo na samjhne diya mujhe..aur aaj mujhe lagta hai ke mein jo takleef sahi Shayad woh mera imtehaan tha..‘’Zaaviya ! woh ba hysiyat cousin aur shohar buhut ache Insaan the….Maine buhut imaan daari se unke saath khush rehne ki Koshish kit hi apni zindagi ke saath samjhota ker liya tha..Ap chahte the na mein zindagi main agey barh jaon meine wahi kia ! Magar Shayad qismat ko yeh bhi gawarah nahiin tha..aur Zaaviyaar ka jana hi meri saza ban gaya...Sabz Qadam......Manhoos......Kia kia na meri samaaton ne suna’’ ; Woh ab ro rahi thi !!Mein bechain ho gaya !‘’Please Tooba ! .........Dont Cry !.........Tumhein pata hai na ke tumharey ansoo mujhe takleef dete hain...In jheel si ankhon ko main humesha muskurata dekho !! hmm ??Aur jo hua us main tumhara koi qasoor nahiin !! shayad humari qismat main Isi Tarhan milna likha tha…’’‘’Aur Ab rona Band kero aur yeh batao tumne Apna Wedding dress pehen ker dekha???’’‘’Nahiin tu ‘’Wedding dress ke ziker per who muskurayi…‘’mein wedding dress ab kal hi pehen ker dekhon gi werna dress ko meri nazar lag jaye gi.’’’’Ufff ! mera dil chaha uske saath saath apna bhi sar phor lun !’’’’Bewaqoof larki !Pehen ker kyun nahiin dekha agar fitting waghera ka masla ho gaya tu?? ’’’’Kya???’’ uske betahasha hansne ki awwaz ane lagi........’’Ab is Tarhan Hans kyun rahi ho eine dunia se nirala sawaal pooch dala hai?? Ya sadme se asar ho gaya hai dimag per???’’Maine jhunjhula ker kaha.....!Usne Bamushkil apni hansi zabt ki;‘’Tauba Hai Aliyaan ..!! aap tu khalistan aurton ki tarhan fitting ke peechay per gaye sach pehla dulha dekha hai maine aisa ..! ‘’Uski hansi phir se start ho gayi aur ab ke uske saath saath meri hansi bhi shamil ho gayi thi...******************************************** *************************5 years Later ..‘’Aur aaj 5 saal baad humara aik Khoobsurat ghar hai...Miss Tooba Aliyaan Zaidi aaj bhi wesi hain shokh-o-Chanchal aur sab ka khayaal rakhne wali aur mujhse be panah Ishq kerne wali..Haan 1 magar uski zimeydaariyon mein zaror izafa ho gaya hai..Jin mein sar-e-feherist ‘’Mein’’ aur ‘’Azaan’’ hain...Haan ..!! ‘’Azaan Aliyaan Zaidi’’ Humara Beta ..!Zindagi ke sare rang mukamal ho gaye hain kahiin koi kami nahiin hai..maine jisey chaha uska saath mujhe mil gaya......’’Laan mein footbaal se khelte Azaan ko dekhte huye Maine be ikhtiyar samne se chaye le kar aati Tooba ko dekha..Woh aaj bhi wesi hi nikhri nikhri si thi..‘’Tooba ! tumhein yaad hai tumne apne us khat mein mujhe akhri baat kya likhi thi aur jis ne mujhe Pakistan wapas aney per majboor ker diya tha??? ‘’Usne Muskura ker dheere se Isbaat mein sar hila diya..Phir palkein jhuka ker dheere se gungunate huye boli..’’Mohabbat ne mohabbat ko pukara hai...Mujhe Apka Saath chahiye Aliyaan ! ’’Aur Maine Muskura ker uski tayid mein sar hila diya !************************************************* **************
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    tuba mishaal ne itna lamba likha , kon parhe adha parha ha adha bahad ma parh k vote karta hoon

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    dono ne bhttttt accha likha hai
    kash dono ko vote de sakti


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    Quote Originally Posted by پاکستانی View Post
    tuba mishaal ne itna lamba likha , kon parhe adha parha ha adha bahad ma parh k vote karta hoon
    :auo: :auo:..........

    ji mera khayaal hai achi story ki quantity nahiin dekhni chahiye..

    aur story ko mazeed acha bananey ke liye kitni bhi words quantity lag rahi ho uski parwah nahiin kerna chahiye aik acho story mein yeh baat qabil-e-gor hoti hai..
    Alhamdullilah

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