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    candel wo sub jo last night likha....

    last night jo sub likha.....aap ki raye ka intazar rahe ga...

    ghazal

    neend se kya laray khwab ko kya samjhaye koi...
    chamaktay chand ko kya chadar me chupaye koi...?

    sarapa khamshi ki baat kaisay sunaye koi...?

    tishnagi aag ki ho to kaisay bujhaye koi...?


    aarzu hai marg-e-mafajat wo bhi teri bahuN me..
    nai hai khawaish k meri marqad sajaye koi...?

    jub dil hi rooth jaye bht milne milane se...
    kya mann hi jalane ko kisi k pass jaye koi...?

    zamana bhr jo hota hai sabhi badlay mitane ko...
    phir apne bachu ko bhala kaisay laraye koi...?

    dil bhar jaye to khuda ko e suna do aakash...
    bhala khud apni zaat ko kya dukh sunaye koi...?

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    Rubai

    rouh ko behla dia, dil pe hi cha gaye...

    kis jahan ki fikr jana, tum jo aa gaye...

    laray jo tuj se to khud apni zaat me rakh k...
    payar jo kia to khud tuj me sama gaye...

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    us shakhs ne muj ko jeeta hai...

    suno logo...!!!

    mere hathun ki...
    sabi aarhi tirchi sartoN k..
    sab bikhre bikhre lafzuN pe...
    mohabat k aarab laga k...

    us shakhs ne muj ko jeeta hai...
    us shakhs ne muj ko jeeta hai...

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    Chand

    Pee jata hun saghar me mila k...
    talkhi-e-ayam ko...
    mhbt k kayam ko...
    mhbt k salam ko...
    jana tumare naam ko...

    magar wo saghar fir se toot jata hai..
    k jub tum...
    us rat me yad aa jao...
    jis rat k marakab me...
    chand tak nai hota...
    chand tak nai hota...

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    Mje sone ki ijazat de do...

    dekho jana,

    rat beet gai...
    kitne sitare aaye aur aa k chalay gaye...
    chand akaila safar me tha...
    thaka hara touta tanha...
    rat ki tairgi se...
    aaram mang raha hai...
    aur in sub k jaisay...
    me b to thak gaya hun...
    aur sub be-khabar soye hen...
    koi jan tak na paye ga...
    koi ungli tak na uthaye ga...
    ab to meri man jao na...
    k apni god me sar rakh k...

    muje rone ki ijazat de do...
    fir rote rote...
    sone ki ijazat de do...
    jana muje sone ki ijazat de do....


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    Last edited by sam001; 25-07-2010 at 05:46 PM.

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    Zabardast
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    Default Re: wo sub jo last night likha....

    kafi acha likha hai

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    Default Re: wo sub jo last night likha....

    apne lafzon ko buhut khoobsurat tareeqay se poetry main use kiya hai
    apko lafzon se khelne ka gur ata hai,kabhi mulki halaat per likhein...mujhe yaqeen hai aap buhut acha likhein gi............
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: wo sub jo last night likha....

    hmm , bohat khoobsurat andaz apnaya aap ne , kahe kahe shayed gehre baatien ki aap ne ,

    Ghazal , nazm , dono ma kafi farq ha aur wohi aap ne yaha dekha dia , lakin u have to continue

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    beautifull


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: wo sub jo last night likha....

    thanks all ji...

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    Default Re: wo sub jo last night likha....

    last night kyun?
    bht paali nazam hai

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    Default Re: wo sub jo last night likha....

    jis subo post kia us se pichli rat ko likhi thi is liye last night....n thnkariaaaa....bht khush raho...

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    umdaa

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