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    candel Competition: September, 2010!

    Assalamu-Alekam WRWB.
    Ummid hai aap sab ALLAH(SWT) ke fazlo-karam se kheriyat say hon gey, INSHAALLAH!
    Hum hazir hein September, 2010 ke muqable ke sath, is ummid ke sath ke aap is muqable mein bharpoor shirkat ker ke isay kaamyaab banayen gey, INSHAALLAH!
    Is baar hum aap ko aik shair dey rahay hein, jis per aap ne tehreer likhni hai, aap isay iqtibas bhi keh saktay hein, para bhi!
    Aap ki tehreer mein is shair ki wazeye tashree honi chaiye, yehni us shair ko parh ker aap ne kia soucha, samjha and usay kis zaviye se dekha!
    Rules:
    1. Tehreer aap ki apni honi chaiye.
    2. Edited post qabile-qabool nahi hogi.
    3. Tehreer bohat ziada lambi na ho.
    4. Entry ki akhri tareekh September, 21 hai.
    Yeh raha shair:
    "Be-basi ka ajeeb alam hai!
    "Mujh ko mujh mein woh ab nahi milta!!"

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!


    Hijab SHair ki tashree karne hian ya tehrer main yeh shair ana chahye munasib jaga per ?

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    shair mein kya hai woh samajh agaya hai..magar likhna khusosan is topic per buhut mushkil hai phr bhi koshish karungi../girly017

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post

    Hijab SHair ki tashree karne hian ya tehrer main yeh shair ana chahye munasib jaga per ?
    Assalamu-Alekam
    shair ki tashreer kerni hai, yeh shair parh ker aap ki jo feelings hein, aap ki jo souch hai aur aap is ko kis angle se dekh rahay hein woh likhna hai.
    waisay he kahin bhi tehreer ke beech mein nahi likh dena

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    Quote Originally Posted by Mishaal View Post
    shair mein kya hai woh samajh agaya hai..magar likhna khusosan is topic per buhut mushkil hai phr bhi koshish karungi../girly017
    Assalamu-Alekam
    ji haan, Mishaal yeh shair jitna simple hai utna he deep bhi hai
    koshsih zaroor kijeay ga

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    w salaam

    khasa mushkil kaam ha mere liye , easy un k liye ha jo kisi na kisi tarha ,Urdu Adab , ko partey hain

    khair try karne ma kia harj ha

    willl try

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    ya sure Pakistani, it might be hard, but not impossible
    koshish zaroor kijeay ga

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post

    Assalamu-Alekam
    ji haan, Mishaal yeh shair jitna simple hai utna he deep bhi hai
    koshsih zaroor kijeay ga
    Yess sure i will try to my best !

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    hmm maine likha hai leken mjhe nahi lagta ke maine is tehrer ke hisab se likha hai ... Hijab agar sahi na lage tu Cancel kardena

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    Default Re: Competition: September, 2010!

    Assalamu-Alekam
    Hmmmmm, well shair se ult likha hai aap ne, but aap ki shyd yeh he feelings hon.
    I won't cancel it, its fine.

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