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    Asalam o Alikum WR WB

    Erum sis ni issy title sy ek poetry share ki hai..per image nazar nhi arahi hia... aur isy title sy me ki pass be design hai.. Erum sis ki ijazaat sy share karna chahti ho.... hope unhi bura na lagye.


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    Oh Allah,
    Make me want that which is beneficial for me...
    And make beneficial for me that which I want

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    W salaamz

    kafi khoobsurat and Dilkash Design kiya aap ne , intihai umda

    but agar bohat bareeki se dekha jaye tu thora bohat doubt ha ,

    agar aap ijazat dey tu wazeha karoon

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    ji zaror... any time.

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    Default Re: Eid Aye hai Baba Kafan bejh do ..........

    Heart touching...
    Alhamdullilah

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    chalye aap ne kaha tu , lakin mind nahi karye ga ma koi teach karne ki kosish nahi kar raha hooon , and na hi ma koi expert hoon

    pehel tu Imla jo likhe us ma 5th line , 2nd word (ka ) ki jaga (ki) ata ha

    frame k corners sab aik jaise nahi , lagta ha bana banaya frame use kia aap ne ,

    and jo pictures use ki woh sahe se mix nahi ho sake ,

    start ma lines k darmeyan gap sahe raha lakin ending main last 5 lines , kuch kharab ho gaye ,

    again sorry agar kuch bura laga ho , and aap art frame khood banane ki try kio nahi karte ?

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    I agree with all mistakez which u have pointed out.
    thankz paki bro... I neva mind.. jab tak ghalti point out na kia jayee.. to kaam mein islaah kaisy ayge... shukria.. INSHALLAH next time tamam in bato'n ka khayal rako gi.
    khush rahi...

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    chalye shukar ha mind nahi kia ,

    aap kam jari rakhe , frame k liye pieces ma aap ko provide kar sakta hoon through links , and tareeqa un ko jorne ka ,

    phir aap zaida jante hain ,

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    hmmm.. chaly app peices share kari.. aur mein koshish jari rakoge
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    Oh Allah,
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    And make beneficial for me that which I want

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    v nice
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    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    heart touching poetry and with dull colors has done its work

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