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    candel ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    salam dosto te dostaniyo...

    kaisay hain sab?


    ji tu oct k competition main ap apni koi ik fav nazam or ik fav shair share karien....koi b nazam jo ap ki apni likhi hoyi ap ki all tym fav ho share karien...or koi b apna likha howa ik shair jo ap ka fav ho buht wo b share karien....

    easy peazy hai na


    rules

    1) poem or shair khud ka likha howa hona chahiye
    2) ik nazam or ik shair se zada sharing nai ker saktay ap
    3) 21st oct last date hai sharing ki

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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    Yeh Shair

    qs6uma - ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010


    Yeh Nazm



    s - ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    bhot easy comp kuch likhna he nahi para


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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010


    easy tou hai, magar me ko is ke liye bhi shayd likhna he paray

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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    Shair


    Mujh Se Jab Kissi Ne Poocha k Kon Hai Woh
    Main Ne Hans K Keh Dya Muhabbat Ki Tafseer Hai Woh


    =====================================

    Nazm

    Main Nahi Janti K Tanhai Ka Dukh
    Kisay Kehte Hain
    Kyon K Main Ne Hamesh
    Tanhai Main Sukh Hi Paaya Hai
    Teri Zaat Ko Apne Wajood Se
    Qareeb Paaya Hai

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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    most favvvv.ShaiR

    Mehfooz hun ap ki bahon mein khass ye ek ehsas hai
    Mera Chand ho ap Maa or meri EID ap ka saath hai


    or most favv. nazam

    Meri Maa mugh se aesi Mohabbat karti hai

    me jo neend se jaag jau andhrey se dar jau to aese mein
    do meherban haath
    meri orr barhte hain
    mughy bahaon mein bharty hain
    or ek Manoos si awaz
    meri kaano mein parti hai
    ek Loori si sunati hain
    mein neend ki wadio me
    kho si jati hun
    jab ankh meri khulti hai
    meri pass mere hoti hai
    bas mughy dekh rahi hoti hai
    janny kya parh k phukti rehti hai
    phir
    mere wajood k apni aankho mein
    bharti hai
    or phir apne kaamo me lag jati hai
    me jo zara dier kahin chali jau
    wo chupky se roti hai
    meri salamati ki duayein mangti hai
    apny sir ko sajdy mein Jhukati hai
    or jab me samne aau,
    mughy choom choom rakhti hai
    apny Rab ka shukar karti hai
    jo zara si jo mughy chot lagy
    to annkho se ashkoo ko bahati hai
    mere zakhm per marham lagti
    or apne ashko se mugy choomti hai
    or raat ko jab me soti hun meri MAa mughy bahon mein bharti hai
    meri Maa mugh se aesi Mohabbat karti
    han.!
    meri Maa mugh se aesi Mohabbat karti hai

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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    wahhhh yeh hoyi na baat sab ki fav poetry parhnay ko miling


    buhtttt zberdast hai sab ki sharing

    appo ap ki wo poem meri fav hai main ne jo design ki hoyi hai faraz ko dedi ki thi me ne apni taraf se per bata b diya tha keh appo ki hai

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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    wah jee

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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    Share

    Wo Shakhs Bhala Sahib-e-Kirdar Kahan ho ga???
    Jo Dar Dar Phira Mohabbaton k Shehr Mein...

    Nazam



    jfkb4x - ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010
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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    great sharingssssssssssssssssssss

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    Default Re: ~Poet club competition~ oct 2010

    Shair

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    ~Nazam~

    Meri Aik buhut Pyari CLose Friend Kay liye Jo Ab janay kahan Hai
    Shayad zindagi Kay melay main kahiin Kho Gayi Hai.......

    Udaas dhalti Shamon Main
    Ujaar-o-Verraan Raston pe
    salagti hui un yadon main
    andheron main ujaalon main
    woh din buhut yaad aatay hain

    jab zindagi kay rang saray
    apnay haath main hua kartay the
    jab titliyon ko pakarnay hum
    Ghar se buhut door nikal jatay the
    jab haste hanste aankhon main
    Achanak aanso aa jatay the
    Woh din buhut yaad atay hain

    Aik doosray se khafa hona
    Humari roz ki adat thi
    Yeh baat thi achi nahiin
    Magar is adat ki humein adat thi

    Woh shaam dhalay baagh main
    Bhaiya se chup ker
    darakhton per charha kartay the
    Woh zamanay kitnay achay the
    Woh Chehray kitnay bholay the
    Ab peechay mur kay dekhon tu
    Janay kyun dil Kat'ta hai
    Woh din buhut yaad atay hain

    jab daadi jaan kay kamray main
    Hum roz kahani suntay the
    sunte sunte so jaatay the
    Jab aankh main aansoo atay the
    Ik Doojey ko samjhatay the
    Aik doojey kay aansouon ko
    Baray pyaar se poncha karta the
    Woh ponchnay walay hath ab kahaan?
    Woh din buhut yaad atay hain

    Yeh dil tu bilkul pagal hai
    Samajhta hi nahiin kuch hai
    Yeh chahta hai koi louta de
    Woh pyaray din woh pyare kal

    Woh chahton ki nagri main
    Jo Jugnoo the buhut saaray
    Kuch tere kuch mere jugnoo
    Suno ab kho gaye hain sab
    Woh jugnoo sab tere mere

    Kabhi jab jaati hon un galiyon main
    Zindagi ik film ban kar
    Ankhon main mere chakrati hai
    Ankhein jab ashak bahati hain
    Yeh ghutan barh si jaati hai
    Aur aisay udaas lamhon main
    Woh Din buhut yaad aatay hain.

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