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    Default ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    Ye chiraag benazar hai ye sitaara bezubaan hai
    abhi tujhse milta julta koi doosra kahaan hai

    wahi shakhs jispe apne dil-o-jaan nisaar kar doon
    wo agar khafa nahi'n hai to zaroor badgumaaa'n hai

    kabhi paa ke tujhko khona kabhi kho ke tujhko paana
    ye janam-janam ka rishta tere mere darmiyaa'n hai

    mere saath chalanewaale tujhe kya mila safar mein
    wahi dukh bhari zamee'n hai wahi ghum ka asmaan hai

    main isi gumaan mein barso'n bada mutma'een raha hoon
    tera jism betagaiyyur hai mera pyaar javedaa'n hai

    unhi raasto'n ne jin par kabhi tum thhey saath mere
    mujhe rok-rok poochha tera humsafar kahaan hai.

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    Default Re: ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    Bohat khobsorat ...
    Janay na kahan woh duniya hai ... Janay na woh hai bhi ya nahi
    Jahan meri Zindagi mujhse ... Itni khafa nahii

    Itni khafa nahiiii

    Itni khafa nahiiiiiiii

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    Default Re: ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    bht khoob moto

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    Default Re: ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    tnx patli ..............

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    Default Re: ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Saraabi*~ View Post
    Bohat khobsorat ...
    meharbani janab ....

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    Default Re: ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    Nice One


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    salaam Zaib saaHiba,

    ummeed hai k aapke mizaaj-e-giraamii ba-Khair hoNge

    aapkii pesh kardah yeh Ghazal go k hai to bahot achchhi par is meN kitaabat kii aGhlaat haiN. beshtar ash'aar Khaarij az bahr haiN. mujeh yeh to ilm nahiiN k yeh kalaam kis kaa hai par aapko agar ilm ho to plz bataaiyegaa. aap in aGhlaat kii tasHeeH farmaa lijiyegaa. shukria. tikniki liHaaz se kahiiN kahiiN kuchh jhol nazar aaye.


    _______Hashmat
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    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    zaburdast
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    Quote Originally Posted by Hashmat Usmani View Post
    salaam Zaib saaHiba,

    ummeed hai k aapke mizaaj-e-giraamii ba-Khair hoNge

    aapkii pesh kardah yeh Ghazal go k hai to bahot achchhi par is meN kitaabat kii aGhlaat haiN. beshtar ash'aar Khaarij az bahr haiN. mujeh yeh to ilm nahiiN k yeh kalaam kis kaa hai par aapko agar ilm ho to plz bataaiyegaa. aap in aGhlaat kii tasHeeH farmaa lijiyegaa. shukria. tikniki liHaaz se kahiiN kahiiN kuchh jhol nazar aaye.


    _______Hashmat

    jhol nazar araha hai ..???

    matalb kahan fikray main.??? ya likhnay kay andaz main .??ya shairi main

    zara tafselan bayan karain na .....

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    Default Re: ~ koi tujh say milta julta ~

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*zaib*~ View Post
    jhol nazar araha hai ..???

    matalb kahan fikray main.??? ya likhnay kay andaz main .??ya shairi main

    zara tafselan bayan karain na .....
    salaam Zaib,

    kaisi haiN?

    yeh Ghazal kis kii hai? what i said is that there are typos and since its not in urdu script lots of words i can not figure out its exact variations. behr [meter] kii bhi kami hai...some ash'aars and some misr'a are out of meter...pahle yeh bataiye k yeh Ghazal hai kiskii. ho saktaa hai maiN use talaash kar luuN kahiiN aur to see the original.

    _______hashmat
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