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    Default log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas

    salaam dosto aur dostanyo [:P]

    ummeed hai k aap sabhi Theek Thak hoNge smile - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas

    is bazm meN pahlii baar aaj maiN jo Ghazal post kar rahaa huuN vo dar_asl ek nazm thii jise maiN ne kaaTh chhaaNT kar Ghazal kaa roop diyaa hai. pataa nahiiN kahaaN tak maiN kaamiiyaab huaa huuN is silsile se, yeh to aap hii bataa paayeNge. Confused!

    yeh Ghazal merii zindagii meN ek jharokhe kii taraH hai. is meN aapko merii zindagii meN aaye huye ek daur kii taraf ishaara milegaa. sad - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas

    ummeed hai k merii yeh kaavish aapkii taba'-e-naazuk par baar-e-garaaN na guzregii aur agar guzar jaaye to maiN uske liye ma'zarat_Khowaah huuN.

    to Ghazal mulaaHizah farmaaiyegaa:

    faqat Khaak_nashiiN,

    ________Hashmat


    1.
    haaye! yeh zulf, yeh ruKh_saar; bahot door na jaa!
    chhup yahiiN yaa pas-e-deevaar, bahot door na jaa!

    pas-e-deevaar = deevaar ke peechhe

    2.
    yeh kabhii abr chale jaise kabhii maah chale
    shab-e-meh ho k shab-e-taar, bahot door na jaa!

    abr = baadal / clouds
    shab-e-meh = chaandnii raat
    shab-e-taar = andherii raat / taareek raat


    3.
    yaad rahte nahiiN aaNsoo mire ojhal ho kar
    bas yahiiN tak thaa tiraa pyaar bahot, door na jaa!

    4.
    tujhe kho jaane kii 'aadat na sahii, makr-o-fareb!
    mujhe ro dene kaa aazaar bahot, door na jaa!

    makr-o-fareb = dhokaa_dhaRii / deception
    aazaar = beemaarii


    5.
    chahchahe karte haiN yuN bhii kabhii raatoN ko tayoor
    yeh nahiiN subHo ke aasaar, bahot door na jaa!

    tayoor = chiRyaaN
    aasaar = nishaaniiyaaN / signs


    6.
    log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas
    mujh se hogaa na kuchh izhaar bahot, door na jaa!

    rang-e-libaas = pahnaave kaa rang / color of clothing

    7.
    mujtam'a haiN terii aaNkhoN meN nuKhaalif paiGhaam
    mushtabah hai tirii raftaar bahot, door na jaa!

    mujtam'a = jam'a kiyaa huaa / ikaTThaa / collectively
    muKhaalif = bar-'aks / ulTaa / opposite
    mustabah = mashkook / aashankit / suspicious


    8.
    do qadam aap chaleN, chaar qadam aah chale
    phir yahaaN shahr na baazaar, bahot door na jaa!

    9.
    terii Khaatir hii to ham gaah chale, gaah ruke
    ab terii raah hai ham_vaar bahot, door na jaa!

    gaah = kabhi / often
    ham_vaar = saaf / baraabar / flat N smooth


    10.
    tu hai jab chashma to kiuN aab tale maah chale
    saada maiN aur tuu pur_kaar bahot, door na jaa!

    chashma = kuaaN / taalaab / sota / stream
    aab = paanii
    saada = simple
    pur_kaar = chalak / witty


    11.
    naao chhoTii sii yeh, aandhii koii na_gaah chale
    beech daryaa meN, na us paar; bahot door na jaa!

    naa_gaah = achaanak / suddenly

    12.
    kiuN huii jaatii hai dheemii terii nai kii aawaaz
    yaad hai va'da, jafaa_kaar! bahot door na jaa!

    nai = baaNsurii / flute / organ
    jafaa_kaar = zaalim(a) / atrocious


    13.
    be-basii dard_talab, yaas-e-tamannaa aaNsoo
    dekh idhar, ab na kar inkaar; bahot door na jaa!

    yaas-e-tamannaa = aarzoo kii naa-ummeedii / hopeless desires/whims

    14.
    jo tujhe laaii thii vo chaah abhi zinda hai
    lauT aa ab bhii, sitam_gaar! bahot door na jaa!

    sitam_gaar = sitan karne_waalaa/waalii

    15.
    chhoRo, tum se to na jabr aaj, na ikraah chale
    aur "Sai'hbaa!" hai guneh_gaar bahot, door na jaa!

    ikraah = ghinaunii cheez / filthy
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    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    Default Re: log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaa

    walaikum salam

    ahan

    janab jee ne bari achi khasi koshish kar dale hai...inpage per likhna nahi ata is per likhte or maza ata

    sub bhot acha hai maza aya parh kar..aise lambi lambi ghazalain

    withlove uncle likhte hain
    pata nahi kha ghiab hian inki yaad agaye yeh parh ker

    share karte rehye ga apna or kalam
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaa

    WalikumAssalam....

    boht achi ghazal likhi hai .... aur 15 Ashaar par jis tarhan apni grift rakhi..... woh kabil-e-tehseen hai...... post karte reheye ga.... intizar rahay ga

    2dnmmf - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas

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    Default Re: log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaa

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    walaikum salam

    ahan

    janab jee ne bari achi khasi koshish kar dale hai...inpage per likhna nahi ata is per likhte or maza ata

    sub bhot acha hai maza aya parh kar..aise lambi lambi ghazalain

    withlove uncle likhte hain
    pata nahi kha ghiab hian inki yaad agaye yeh parh ker

    share karte rehye ga apna or kalam
    salaa Naaz saaHiba,

    kalaam pasand farmaane ke liye aur Hauslah afzaai karne ke liye maiN aapkaa teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar huN. ji bilkul saHeeH farmaayaa k agar urdu rasm-ul-Khat meN maktoob hotii to kam se kam is Ghazal ke 'ayoob to pinhaan rahte, aashkaar na hote WithLove kii Ghazaliyaat paRhne ke liye to ab meraa bhii dil mauj-zan ho rahaa hai insha Allah vo bhi jald hii tashreef laayeNge

    _______Hashmat
    0e480d0a 1548 44d4 a4a0 c060e77c8f98 - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaasimages?qtbnANd9GcRzS69 Aa0hT FRo5Gf7r7mr5ShrZII6bgd8l7Z0JwQF4ALMmkG - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas

    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    Default Re: log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaa

    Quote Originally Posted by Paras View Post
    WalikumAssalam....

    boht achi ghazal likhi hai .... aur 15 Ashaar par jis tarhan apni grift rakhi..... woh kabil-e-tehseen hai...... post karte reheye ga.... intizar rahay ga
    salaam Paras saaHiba,

    aapkaa be_had mamnoon o mutashakkir huN k aapne merii adnaa sii kaavish ko na sirf pasand farmaayaa bal k us par apne besh-bahaa ta'assuraat bhii ba-ham pahoNchaaye. bas grift itnii hii thii k ash'aar ke ma'aanii ke gale ghooNT diye

    ji, insha Allah, aapke Hukm kii takmeel insha Allah bil-zaroor hogii

    _______Hashmat
    0e480d0a 1548 44d4 a4a0 c060e77c8f98 - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaasimages?qtbnANd9GcRzS69 Aa0hT FRo5Gf7r7mr5ShrZII6bgd8l7Z0JwQF4ALMmkG - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas

    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    Default Re: log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaa

    Boht Khoob hashmatbhai
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    Default Re: log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaa

    Janab aap ne bahot achhi Ghazal likhi hai saath saath meaning b likhi
    aur achhay tareeqay se samjhaya bhi
    likhte rahen
    khush Rahen
    dilduniyameinsiggysd - log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaas

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    buhat zberdast
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    Default Re: log poochheNge tirii shakl, tiraa rang-e-libaa

    kia baat hai

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    janab

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