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    cute Gazal: Ab to unke chahre pe bepanah chehre hain


    Peshe Khidmet :

    Do ghari mayasser ho unka hum safer hona
    Phir hamain gavara hai der-bader hona.

    Ek aazabe-pahem hai aise daure-bahshet main
    Zindgi ke chehre per apna chasme-ter hona.

    Ab to unke chahre pe bepana chehre hain
    Kya ajab neymet thi verna bekhaber hona.

    Unke vasl ki saahet hum pe aaye to jana
    Kis ghari ko kehte hain khwab main baser hona.

    *******

    Jo Dost is gazal ke shaayer ka naam batainge
    (subse pahle) unhe mooh-maanga Enaam.


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    Default Re: Gazal: Ab to unke chahre pe bepanah chehre hai

    achi sharing hia
    naam nahi pata..
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    cute Re: Gazal: Ab to unke chahre pe bepanah chehre hai

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    achi sharing hia
    naam nahi pata..
    Shukriya Mohterma gazal pasand
    ki aapne per shayer ka naam na
    bataya or jaan boojh ker nahi bataya.
    Main batata huin- Parveen Shakir.
    Sahiba, ye bahut lajawab kalaam
    hai Parveen ka per samajh nahin aata
    avoid kyon kerte hain achhe alfaaz
    wali ko, bhaijaan aur Appoji (not U).
    Ye akser maine note kiya hai.
    Anyway, since u hav approved, its
    enough. Acha G, Khudahafiz.


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    Default Re: Gazal: Ab to unke chahre pe bepanah chehre hai

    nice sharing...............




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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