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    candel ~ Qaid ~

    2 saal phele b share ki thi yeh tehrer
    leken aj bus dil chaha in lamhon ko
    phir se mehsos karney ka...

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    Zabardasttt NAz appo::
    mein ne ni parhi thi pehlyyy:rolleys:
    BHTTTT hi khoobsurat


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~ Qaid ~

    Muhabbat per ap se ziada acchi tehreer mein ne abhi tak yahan kisi ki nahi parhi
    :Rosee:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~ Qaid ~

    App sub ki MOhabbat hai bus
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Quote Originally Posted by SanoriTa View Post
    Muhabbat per ap se ziada acchi tehreer mein ne abhi tak yahan kisi ki nahi parhi
    :Rosee:


    Mere Dil ki baat kehdi aunty ne

    bilkul thek kaha..


    @ Naaz - maine bhi pehle nahi parhi thi.. bohat achi lagi .. aur mujhe thori thori thought "tum kaisi mohbbat karte ho " se milti milti lagi start ki... khir.. boht acha likha hay.. and i totally agree what santi aunty said..

    keep writing.. keep writing good.. !!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post


    Mere Dil ki baat kehdi aunty ne

    bilkul thek kaha..


    @ Naaz - maine bhi pehle nahi parhi thi.. bohat achi lagi .. aur mujhe thori thori thought "tum kaisi mohbbat karte ho " se milti milti lagi start ki... khir.. boht acha likha hay.. and i totally agree what santi aunty said..

    keep writing.. keep writing good.. !!
    mein to hamesha theek hi kehti hun:
    lekin ye mein aunty kahan se ho gayi?:soch:
    uncle kahin k:bleh::bleh:

    NAz siso hamri Muhabbat to hamesha rahy gi ap k saath:aa:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post


    Mere Dil ki baat kehdi aunty ne

    bilkul thek kaha..


    @ Naaz - maine bhi pehle nahi parhi thi.. bohat achi lagi .. aur mujhe thori thori thought "tum kaisi mohbbat karte ho " se milti milti lagi start ki... khir.. boht acha likha hay.. and i totally agree what santi aunty said..

    keep writing.. keep writing good.. !!


    pata hai Killer main jab b lkhti hona wo sub mera apna hota hai...mere zahan main bus aik chehra hota hia uske bad mjhe nai pata hota ke duniya mai kia likha gaya kiya nahi ..isliye mjhe bhtttt ajeeb sa lagta hai jab koi kehde ke yeh us se milta hai yeh is se milta hai..yeh main kehna b nai chahti thi leken pata nahi ku aj mera dil kiya ke main kehdon ke main aisa sochti hon...
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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post

    pata hai Killer main jab b lkhti hona wo sub mera apna hota hai...mere zahan main bus aik chehra hota hia uske bad mjhe nai pata hota ke duniya mai kia likha gaya kiya nahi ..isliye mjhe bhtttt ajeeb sa lagta hai jab koi kehde ke yeh us se milta hai yeh is se milta hai..yeh main kehna b nai chahti thi leken pata nahi ku aj mera dil kiya ke main kehdon ke main aisa sochti hon...

    I am sorry agar tumhe bura ya ajib laga .. i agree.. jab ham likhte hain to pore dilse likhte hain lekin jo reader hota hay wo compare zeror karta hay agar us se milti hui koi chez nazer se guzri ho.. writer ki intention nahi hoti yaqeenan ik sa likhna kyon ke her koi unique likhna chhahta hay kuch.. khir insaani fitrat hay... isliy mere mind...

    han mai bhi insan hi hun.. isliy mujhe thora match hoti lagi isliy kehdia.. mera hergiz ye matlab nahi tha k tum ne us ko copy kia ya us se inspiration li..

    i really undersand !!

    acha kia bata diya clear hogea

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post

    I am sorry agar tumhe bura ya ajib laga .. i agree.. jab ham likhte hain to pore dilse likhte hain lekin jo reader hota hay wo compare zeror karta hay agar us se milti hui koi chez nazer se guzri ho.. writer ki intention nahi hoti yaqeenan ik sa likhna kyon ke her koi unique likhna chhahta hay kuch.. khir insaani fitrat hay... isliy mere mind...

    han mai bhi insan hi hun.. isliy mujhe thora match hoti lagi isliy kehdia.. mera hergiz ye matlab nahi tha k tum ne us ko copy kia ya us se inspiration li..

    i really undersand !!

    acha kia bata diya clear hogea
    thanks understand karne ko...jo feelings ko lamhey hamare hote hian hum un k liye aise he shidat pasand se hotey hain..isliye bus ...kehdiya maine ...
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