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    Default punctuate this she'r of Ghalib CORRECTLY, plz!

    salaam dosto,

    Ghalib ka yeh she'r punctuation kii roo se bahot aham hai. is she'r ke pahle misr'e emN ek comma [,] lagnaa hai magar kahaN? yeh comma agar saHeeH maqaam par na lge to she'r ke ma'nii kuchh aur ho jaate haiN.

    lemme see who punctuates this she'r CORRECTLY!

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    jee DhoonDhtaa hai phir vohii fursat k raat din
    baiThe raheN tasavvur-e-jaanaaN kiye huye!

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    Default Re: punctuate this she'r of Ghalib CORRECTLY, plz!

    wsalam

    hmmm pata nahi
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: punctuate this she'r of Ghalib CORRECTLY, plz!

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    wsalam

    hmmm pata nahi
    thanx
    0e480d0a 1548 44d4 a4a0 c060e77c8f98 - punctuate this she'r of Ghalib CORRECTLY, plz!images?qtbnANd9GcRzS69 Aa0hT FRo5Gf7r7mr5ShrZII6bgd8l7Z0JwQF4ALMmkG - punctuate this she'r of Ghalib CORRECTLY, plz!

    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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