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    snow November

    Kuch lamhay NOVEMBER k
    Hum ne youn guzaray hain
    Mosam uski yadon k
    Tasveer may utaray hain
    Kapkapatay honton se
    Dagmagati dharkan se
    Hum ne apnay KHALIQ se
    Bus dua ye mangi hay
    Ab k bar sawan main
    Jb b badal utrain to
    Bus yehi tamana hay
    Nafraton ki barish may
    Dushmanon ki sazish may
    Bus isi guzarish may
    Zindagi ko jeenay ka
    Ikhtiyar mil jaye
    Aye meray KHUDA sb ko
    Apna pyar mil jaye.

    (Ameen)



    Kyon Her Koi Chhor Jata Hay Tnha Mujhko
    May Mazboot To Bohat Hoon Magar Pathar To Nahi


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    Default Re: November

    aamen jnaab

    such a nice sharring
    I am fine , it only hurts when i breathe

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    ameen

    very nice sharing
    thnx 4 it
    Tujhey bhulaa diyaaa
    Phir kyun teri yaadoun ney
    Mujhey rula diyaa

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    nyc
    نہ جانے ہم کہاں گم ہو چکے ہیں ....
    جو ممکن ہو -- تو ہم کو ڈهونڈ لاٶ ...

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    Thank u all friends



    Kyon Her Koi Chhor Jata Hay Tnha Mujhko
    May Mazboot To Bohat Hoon Magar Pathar To Nahi


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    Default Re: November

    achi sharing hay..lekin shyed poet bhol gae..agla mahina December ka hay.. isme shyed duaen poori nahi hoti..

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    Default Re: November

    Kuch lamhay NOVEMBER k
    Hum ne youn guzaray hain
    Mosam uski yadon k
    Tasveer may utaray hain
    Adab ki zaban men ager adbi words use karen to un ka apna alag hi rang hota hey,

    In sheron men November adbi word nhi hey, Kuch lamhon se murrad hey keh baaqi waqt u ne duneya dari men guzara hey, so u ki feelings strong nhi hen, ager u serdion ka pora mosam us ki yaad men guzarte to feelings bohat strongs hona thi,

    Mosam us ki yadon ke mean keh ub u is ke sath nhi ho wo u se alag ho chuki hey, so ager mosam ki jagah Lamhe Beti yadon ke use hota to behter tha,


    hahahaha sorry yaar me kuch zeyada hi bol giya,

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    Default Re: November

    Quote Originally Posted by Silly View Post


    Adab ki zaban men ager adbi words use karen to un ka apna alag hi rang hota hey,

    In sheron men November adbi word nhi hey, Kuch lamhon se murrad hey keh baaqi waqt u ne duneya dari men guzara hey, so u ki feelings strong nhi hen, ager u serdion ka pora mosam us ki yaad men guzarte to feelings bohat strongs hona thi,

    Mosam us ki yadon ke mean keh ub u is ke sath nhi ho wo u se alag ho chuki hey, so ager mosam ki jagah Lamhe Beti yadon ke use hota to behter tha,


    hahahaha sorry yaar me kuch zeyada hi bol giya,
    yeh inho ne nahi likhi jo ap itna zaida bol gaye
    or agar November Admi word nahi hai
    tu December or September b adbi word nai hongia
    in per b poetry likhi gaye hia or Dec per tu beshumar poetry hia..
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: November

    yeh inho ne nahi likhi jo ap itna zaida bol gaye
    or agar November Admi word nahi hai
    tu December or September b adbi word nai hongia
    in per b poetry likhi gaye hia or Dec per tu beshumar poetry hia..
    Oh me ko kia pata tha keh me ke peeche aap hen, Nhi to me very nice sharing ker ke bhaag jata,

    me detail me nhi jaonga just itta hi kahonga keh jis qabeele se me belong kerta hon wahan hum mosmon ka ziker kerte hen, English month ka use nhi kerte.

    Aap chahen to use karen, Aap ki apni pasand hey, mager jub me kisi ko samjhoanga to jo me ne study kiya us ke mutabiq hi samjhaonga na,

    Aap bhi theek ur me bhi theek,

    Thanks

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    Default Re: November

    Quote Originally Posted by Silly View Post


    Oh me ko kia pata tha keh me ke peeche aap hen, Nhi to me very nice sharing ker ke bhaag jata,

    me detail me nhi jaonga just itta hi kahonga keh jis qabeele se me belong kerta hon wahan hum mosmon ka ziker kerte hen, English month ka use nhi kerte.

    Aap chahen to use karen, Aap ki apni pasand hey, mager jub me kisi ko samjhoanga to jo me ne study kiya us ke mutabiq hi samjhaonga na,

    Aap bhi theek ur me bhi theek,

    Thanks
    sub tu phele tu yeh ke meri zimedari hia ke kuan kiya comments derhaa hai main dekhon...main sirf ap ko nahi dekh rahe sub ko dekh rahe hon jo mere Admin ke faraiz main shamil hia..

    aik taraf ap kehrahe hian ke Detail main nahi jaye gai or aik taraf kafi lamba bhasan b diya hai...ap jis b qabley se belong karte hon...leken app ne shayd Urdu poetry parhi nahi hia ....beshumar barey barey SHair Hazrat ne apni poetry main english words use kiye hian tu zarorat jaha hti hai waha yeh chez use hoti hia..kisi ne fard-e-jurm aid tu nahi ki hue ke use he nahi hosakt...ap ne agar sahi tarah study kiya hota tu ap is masle ko issue he nahi banatey...December ki poetry ke bare mian app ka kiya khayal hai ?
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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