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    Kar liya hai maine faisla

    Kar liya hai maine faisla
    Teri har tamana puri karo

    Bhoot roo liya kisi ki yaad main
    Ab apni zindagi khushi say basar karo

    kar hi leta ho mai bhi shadi
    Kisi ki tamana to puri karo

    Tujh rakha hai dil kay jitna kareeb
    Us say zeyada ab doori karo

    Yaad aahaygi to roo longa
    per tujh say na koi shikwa karoon

    Hota hi nahi hai meri bato ka asar
    Tujh say phir kyou mai baatayn karoon

    Nahi hai khushiyo say koi wasta mera
    Teray hi khatir khushiyo say rabta karoon

    Dard-e-dil dafna day apnay dil ki har khuwais
    sanam ab puri teri hi har khuwaishay karoon


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    Default Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    hmm ap ki apni he haina yeh
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    same question

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    Default Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    hmm ap ki apni he haina yeh

    ji Meri apni hi hai

    Aur mai dard-e-dil k name say hi likhta hon

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    Default Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    bhtt accha likha hai:up:
    lagta hi ni ap ne likha hai:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    Quote Originally Posted by SanoriTa View Post
    bhtt accha likha hai:up:
    lagta hi ni ap ne likha hai:
    Thank's k aap ko pasand aai wesay mujhe meri apni likhi hoi aik hi poetry pasand hai thor di hai tujh say dostoi maine
    aur wo my poetry mai post ki hai aur mujhe umeed nahi thi k ye pasand aahay gi sub ko

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    Default Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    umeed acchi honi chahyie or wese b sab apni si ek koshish karty hain

    ur welcome


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    Quote Originally Posted by SanoriTa View Post
    umeed acchi honi chahyie or wese b sab apni si ek koshish karty hain

    ur welcome

    Ya ur right jabhi to mai apni si koshish kar rha hon
    agher hosla barane walay moojud hon to insaan likhta hi rehta hai aur seekh bhi jata hai likhna to mai likhna hi seekh rha hon

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    Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    Quote Originally Posted by misha View Post
    really a superb poetry
    i really like it
    thanks for this
    Thanko ji

    Bas kabhi kabhi hum kamal kar jatay hen
    likhna aata nahi likhne mai mesal kar jatay hen

    hamari to samajh mai aata nahi kuch
    par log passand kar kay hamen heran kar jatay hen

    yahi soach kar to hum likh letay hen
    dosto ki mohabbat hai jo kamal kar jatay hen

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    Default Re: Kar liya hai maine faisla

    boht khoob likha hai
    likhtey raheye

    eq2hdk - Kar liya hai maine faisla

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