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    MuntaziR

    Jany kis kis ko aye Rass ye DECEMBER
    kahin piya milan ki aas liye
    jany kitni masoom larkia
    apny nazuk se dil k saath
    Rah e Muhabbat per hain khari muntazir,
    Kanch si annkho mein
    sunehary khuwab liye
    in ki tabeer hony ki Muntazir,

    Adhury khuwabo ko seeny se lagaye
    in k wafa hony ki muntazir,

    Adhuri si apni zaat ko
    Mukammal karny ki muntazir,

    Kitni Nadan hain,,,,
    sab janti hai k
    nahi miltii khuwabo ki Tabeerain aksar,,
    nahi hoty Wadein wafa Aksar,,
    nahi ho pati zaat ki TAkmeel aksar,,
    jo adhura reh jaye
    nahi ho pata wo Mukammal aksar,

    per phir bhi
    khari Muntazir
    khari Muntazir..!!

    ~SaniYA~
    Last edited by SenoriTa; 04-12-2010 at 05:43 PM.


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    bohat achi nazam likhi hay...

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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    achi likhi hai nazm
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    Achi likhi hy.. very nice..

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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    Tahnk u jia ,Naz appo n Killerr:Rosee:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    Kitni Nadan hain,,,,
    sab janti hai k
    nahi miltii khuwabo ki Tabeerain aksar,,
    nahi hoty Wadein wafa Aksar,,
    nahi ho pati zaat ki TAkmeel aksar,,
    jo adhura reh jaye
    nahi ho pata wo Mukammal aksar,

    per phir bhi
    khari Muntazir
    khari Muntazir..!


    wah wah ty again wah
    نہ جانے ہم کہاں گم ہو چکے ہیں ....
    جو ممکن ہو -- تو ہم کو ڈهونڈ لاٶ ...

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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    nice...........

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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    very nice if it was your own then great applause.

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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    thank u sky ,sara:Rosee:
    n shaista:Rosee:
    yes it is my own


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~*MuntaziR*~

    muntazir ........
    mujhe bas aik yeh lafz buhut bhaya muntazir

    pata nahiin kyun sar nazam main yeh lafz muntazir buhut haavi raha pata nahiin kyun udaas ho gayi.. bilawaja hi

    buhut acha likha hai saanni very well
    Alhamdullilah

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