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    Default ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    Nahi mughy tum se pyaar
    is baat ne
    cheen liya
    uss ko mugh se..,
    wo sach kehta tha
    Muhabbat mein mazak nahi..

    SaniYa


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    mujhe sub words ultey ku mehsos horahe hain

    agr yeh aise hoti tu or achi lagti

    Mujhe TUm se Mohabbat Nahi..
    Is Bat ne Cheen liya Usey
    wo sach kehta tha...!!!
    Mohabbat Main Mazak Acha Nahi HOta...!!!

    aik naakam si koshish ki hia leken jis ki poetry ho wo hi sahi karsakta hia.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    khayal bohat acha hai dear

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    Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    Naz i agry wid u

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    Default Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    @ Naaz - naakam nahi, tum ne thek bataya.

    @ santi- koi baat nahi yar.. mai to pata nahi kitni poetry likhta hun jo mahino baad ghlat lagti hyto remove kardeta hon.. isme to phir bhi thori correction hogi bas..

    tum acha likhti ho.. keep writing keep it up.



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    Default Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    mujhe sub words ultey ku mehsos horahe hain

    agr yeh aise hoti tu or achi lagti

    Mujhe TUm se Mohabbat Nahi..
    Is Bat ne Cheen liya Usey
    wo sach kehta tha...!!!
    Mohabbat Main Mazak Acha Nahi HOta...!!!

    aik naakam si koshish ki hia leken jis ki poetry ho wo hi sahi karsakta hia.
    Mujhey tum se mohabbat nahiin hmm..

    yeh theek hai

    par zyada accha ho agar

    mujhe us se mohabbat nahiin
    is baat ne cheen liya usey mujhse

    first line mein ''usey'' lagane ka reason hai ke second line se match ho jaye ga kyun ke second line mein bhi

    ''usey'' araha hai
    Last edited by мιѕнααℓ; 08-12-2010 at 01:29 PM.
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    so sorry to all
    i know words ultay pulaty ho gaye bas dhiyan nahi raha

    mein ne phir koshish ki hai

    KAhan tha mein ne yun hi
    mughy tum se Muhabbat nahi
    uss ne dekha jab meri ORr
    to mein ne mehsoos kia
    us ki annkho mein theri nami
    mugh se kuch kehna chahti hai
    per is se pehly mein parh pati
    wo mery pas rukka hi nahi.
    chalti rahi us k qadmo k nishano per
    mein bht dair
    magar wo itni door nikal gaya k
    dhoondhne se bhi mila nahi
    shikwa karu to kissy?
    mery MAzak k siwa to kisi ne
    us ko mugh se cheena nahi........
    kash mein parh leti uss ki aankho ki nami ko
    to samajh jati
    Muhabbt mein accha nahi
    Muhabbat mein mazak accha nahi..!
    Last edited by SenoriTa; 08-12-2010 at 03:40 PM.


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    achi hai
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

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    Default Re: ~Muhabbat mein mazak nahi~

    Thank u NAz n MISh correction k liyee:Rosee:

    thanks hijab or Killer:Rosee:
    or RAno:Rosee:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    v.nice

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