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    snow short story Kali

    Kabhi kabhi mere dill main khayal aata hay
    k jysy tujh ko banaya gaya hy mery liye

    halki aawaz main roz hi to sunti thii.
    or roz hi main pochta acha tery liye bhi kisi ko banaya hy....................or jawab
    main mujhy aysy dykhti k us ki aankhoon sey sitary nikalty nazar aaty or charoon owr phyl jaty.......
    raat gay main chupky sey amman k dar sey door gali k kony par hi bike band kar k khamosh qadmoon darwazy par puhunchta to jany usy kysy khabar ho jati
    abhi main dosra sans na ly pata k darwaz khul jata ...........
    aadat si ho gai thii is liye soochna hi choor diya tha............
    kamry main safai ka wo aalam k main pehchan hi nahi pata k jo hashr subah kar k nikla tha ye wohi hy...or sath hawa main rachi basi aamna ki khushboo...pata nahi kitni dyri lagai ho safai main.......
    AAMNA meri phuppi ki byti thii. bachpan main jab sal bhar ki thii man bap sath choor gay .amman apni ghar ly aain . koi byti nahi thii na or us ghreeb ka bhi mamoon ky siwa bacha hi kon tha.
    waqt hawa ho gaya .
    aik din amman piyar sy pass bitha kar bolain sun faisal dill ki bat kahon
    agar ghar ki larki ghar main hi rahy to kiya ho
    main samajh or nasamjhi k dorahy par khara amaan ka moun takny laga.
    dykh sara ghar chamka k rakhti hy kitni suggar hy .or main jysy hosh main aagaya
    nahi aamman main nahi karta kali sey shadi wadi.(mera rang jo dodh sa gora tha)....ary badbakht dykh to kahan kali hy gandumai rang hy ....kysa namk hy soorat par,kesa khara naqsha ,lamba qad,khush atwaar,hansmukh,baikhlaaq hy.
    rehny dain amman ....main keh kar chal diya

    FAISAl aaj zara jaldi aan kuch mehman aain gy.kon amaan kon aay ga
    aamna ko dykhny koi aay ga qareeb aaty aaty amman dabi aawaz main booliin
    acha........................ ab aamna apny ghar ki ho jay gi amman burburaain
    magar mujhy kya main to khush tha amnna ki dost jo gali k akhri ghar main rehti thii
    aamna k tawasut saima sy mill bhi lya karta tha rang gora tha to khoobsoorat hi nazar aati
    shaam mehman aay chaly bhi gay aamna ki bat pakki ho gai......
    shadi shoro thii
    main bhi buhut khush saima sey jo hardam aamna samna tha khush kiun na hota bhala.......

    shdi ka din aan puncha or phir rukhsati ka waqt bhi par jany sham sey kiya ho raha tha
    dill sambhal hi nahi raha tha.aik ghabrahat thi
    jysy kuch hath sey nikal raha ho ,
    jysy manzil ki taraf jany wali akhri treen choott rahi ho,
    rangiin qamqamy achanak bhayanak shooly lagny lagy ,
    kuch samajh nahi a arhi thii
    or
    AAMANA rukhsat ho gai thii..........akhri bar car main bythy howy jab us ny meri taraf dykha to ankhoon sey nikalty sitary charoon owr nahi phyly balky us k galoon sey hoty howy us k hi undar kahin gum ho gay....
    or mere charoon owr sitaroon ki bajay amman ki awaz gounj rahi thi badbakht.... badbakht..... badbkhat......
    or us akhri nazar main wo meri zindagi ko apni kalak batoor tuhfa dy gai ...
    or main ab samjha k meri manzil ki aakhri train main ny khud choor dii thii................

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    yeh kahani tou adhoori hai na
    mera libas hai tu zps3e44c641 - short story Kali

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    nahi ye mukamal hy

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    Saima ka kya bana?
    mera libas hai tu zps3e44c641 - short story Kali

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    main samjh rahi thi sirf likhny k liye samjh chahiye
    magar yahan lagat hy parhny k liye bhi lolz

    zuhair jab kisi ko ehsas ho k darasala usy to muhabbat us sakhsh sy thi jo chala gaya to kya wo kisi qabil reh jay ga ????
    n aik bat or bhi k dill gaya to sab gaya samjh aai ya or samjhaon?

    Quote Originally Posted by zuhair View Post
    Saima ka kya bana?

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    i was just kidding. . .
    mera libas hai tu zps3e44c641 - short story Kali

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    baz dafa aik baat kisi ko samjhane main sadiyan lag jati hian
    or phir kasak..ehsas-e-nidamat he reh jata hai..
    aise zindagi kitni mushkil hojati hia...
    bhot acha likha hia...
    choti magar pur asar tehrer
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    Superb..but very sad... end
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: short story Kali

    :Rosee:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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