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    Default ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..

    ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain....
    essay writing girl6 - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..

    ہم شاعر سے لو گ بھی توبہ کتنے پاگل ہوتے ہیں

    کھوئے کھوئے رہتے ہیں ہم جیسے گھائل ہوتے ہیں

    چھوٹی چھوٹی باتوں کو ہم پہروں سوچتے رہتے ہیں

    ساتھ ہمارے جگنو،پھول اور بادل جیسے ہوتے ہیں۔۔۔۔۔۔

    ہم پردیس میں رہنے والے یادوں کے سنگ رہتے ہیں

    یاد کے جگنو برساتوں کے بادل جیسے ھوتے ھیں

    ابن آدم آدم خور بنا ہے دیکھو شہروں میں۔۔۔

    یہاں بھی کچھ انسان سنا ہے جنگل جیسے ہوتے ہیں

    کل اک ماں نے اپنا بچہ چند سکوں میں بیچ دیا

    غربت کے سائے آسیبی دلدل جیسے ہوتے ہیں

    کتنی اچھی لگتی ہیں یہ لڑکیاں ماں اور بابا کو

    ان کے سروں پہ شرم و حیا کے آنچل جیسے ہوتے ہیں

    سجنی بیھٹی نیر بہائے ساجن کیوں پردیس گئے

    اب نیناں تو بھیگے بھیگے کاجل جسے ہوتے ہیں

    poetry=zeeno(zeest.sun)
    Last edited by zeeno; 18-12-2010 at 05:32 PM.
    ButterflyGirl - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    titlion ko barish main kun pakrna chahon main
    ye mairi odasi ko kam to kar nahe sakteen

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    shuru ki chaar lines to perh leen per me ki ankhon main dard hogaya
    kia aap isay english text main likhdengi plzz
    me ko shuru se hi yeh achi laging main isey mazeed perhn a chahti hoon..
    Sach Hai, Baja Hai ,Mujhsey Shikayat Janab Ki
    Seh Seh K Mainey Zulm,Hai Adat Kharab Ki

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    1001079s20okvzsyg - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    ButterflyGirl - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    titlion ko barish main kun pakrna chahon main
    ye mairi odasi ko kam to kar nahe sakteen

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    Quote Originally Posted by Saffroni View Post
    shuru ki chaar lines to perh leen per me ki ankhon main dard hogaya
    kia aap isay english text main likhdengi plzz
    me ko shuru se hi yeh achi laging main isey mazeed perhn a chahti hoon..
    ham shaair say log bhi toba kitnay pagal hotay hain
    khoie khoie rahtay hain ham jaise ghail hotay hain....
    choti choti baton ko ham pahron sochtay rahtay hain
    sath hamare jugno,phool or badal jaise hotay hain..
    ham pardais main rahne vale yadon k sang rahtay hain
    yad k jugnoo barsaton k badal jaise hotay hain...
    ibne Adam Adam khor bana hay daikho shahron may
    yahan bhi koch insan suna hay jungle jaise hotay hain
    kal ik maan nay apna bacha chand sikon may baich dia
    ghurbat k saie Asaibi daldel jaise hotay hain...........
    kitni achi lagti hain ye larkiyan maan or baba ko..
    in k saron pay sharm .o. haya k anchal jaise hotay hain
    sajni baithi neer bahaie sajan kun pardais gaie...
    ab naina to bhigay bhigay kajal jaise hotay hain....

    poet by=zeest.sun


    ye lo safo...
    ButterflyGirl - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    titlion ko barish main kun pakrna chahon main
    ye mairi odasi ko kam to kar nahe sakteen

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    Achi koshish hay.. concept bhi acha.. lekin mujhe words ka arrangement aur selection nahi bhaya .. bat poet se start ki aur haalaat per ai.. then mohabat pe..
    i think ik topic per thora continue karo..

    again.. concept acha tha boht.. but..
    i hope bura nahi laga ho..

    keep it up.

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    Achi koshish hay.. concept bhi acha.. lekin mujhe words ka arrangement aur selection nahi bhaya .. bat poet se start ki aur haalaat per ai.. then mohabat pe..
    i think ik topic per thora continue karo..

    again.. concept acha tha boht.. but..
    i hope bura nahi laga ho..

    keep it up.
    thanks for ur coments...
    ButterflyGirl - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    titlion ko barish main kun pakrna chahon main
    ye mairi odasi ko kam to kar nahe sakteen

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    zaberdast !!
    bahot aalaaaaa

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    thanks...
    ButterflyGirl - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    titlion ko barish main kun pakrna chahon main
    ye mairi odasi ko kam to kar nahe sakteen

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    Default Re: ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay ha

    1001079s20okvzsyg - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    ButterflyGirl - ham shair say log b toba kitnay pagal hotay hain..
    titlion ko barish main kun pakrna chahon main
    ye mairi odasi ko kam to kar nahe sakteen

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