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    candel Poet Club Competition January 2011



    Naya Saal Mubarak ho
    Umid karti hon Is Saal B App Sub ka Sath SD ke sath rahey ga InshAllah

    Is Bar Topic Kuch aisa hai k...

    "Yeh Saal Bhi Udaas Raha"

    Is line ko apni Nazm main is tarah samuye k Nazm ka hissa malom ho.


    Rules :


    1 ... Aik member aik he Nazm Share Karsakta hai.
    2 ... Aik jaisa mat share kijeye ga.
    3 ... Comp ki last Date 21 Jan hai.

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition January 2011

    w.salam Naaz !
    Tumhe bhi nea saal mubarak ho aur inshAllah khushyon bhara saal ho u k liye..
    meri adna si koshsih ye rahi..


    yesaalsd - Poet Club Competition January 2011

    Dilon me muafqat panapti rahi
    Kufria her andaaz raha

    Qatal.gaah bana raha mulk mera
    Mazloom yahan be.awaaz raha

    Tarapti rahi maaen insaaf ke liye
    Hukumraan be.niyaaz raha

    Ammer.e.sheher ne qeemti poshaak pehan li
    Dekhaa jo zamiir apna, to be libaas raha

    Thak gea mai apni islaah karte karte
    zamana badguman mujhse bilajwaz raha

    Kai Talkh yaadein mujhe sounp ker chala gea
    Ye saal bhi udaas raha



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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition January 2011



    YeH Saal Bhi Udaas raha !!

    na jane kyun Yeh saal bhi
    udaas raha
    kahiin ansoo the,
    kahiin ghum palta raha
    tu mere pas ho ker bhi,
    mere saath ho ker bhi
    mere paas na raha,
    kyun ajnabi bana raha??
    shikayatein buhut mujhe,
    aur shikwon ki kami nahiin
    magar pyaar bhi tujhse hai,
    mein tujhe manata raha
    huyi naqaam koshishein meri
    tu chala gaya
    mere paas kya raha??
    tujhe manatey manatey
    jane kitna waqt beet gaya
    waqt e ruksat qareeb agaya
    aur yeh saal bhi guzar gaya
    kya kahon ab jane wale se?
    faqat itna ke
    yeh saal bhi udaas raha !!
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition January 2011

    ye sal b odas raha

    iss sal b oss bad guman anjan nay
    kuch na kaha
    iss sal b ham yad ki galiyon main
    phirtay hi rahe
    iss sal b ham ap ki
    nazron say girtay hi rahe
    chup chap ham baitahy rahe
    kya kuch na ham sahtay rahe
    kahna boht kuch tha
    mager kuch na kaha
    ye sal b odas raha
    rootha hi raha...
    iss saal b ham ap ki yadon main
    gum sum hi rahe..
    iss sal b tanhayan aa k hamin
    dasti rahen..
    iss sal b shab ghiaz yadain
    ankhon main basti raheen
    ik bar to ajao na
    dil nay kaha
    ye sal b odsa raha..

    6121ua2lcx211l - Poet Club Competition January 2011



    ButterflyGirl - Poet Club Competition January 2011
    titlion ko barish main kun pakrna chahon main
    ye mairi odasi ko kam to kar nahe sakteen

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition January 2011

    hmm i will share later.........inshallah..

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    still  sad by FishEye lens - Poet Club Competition January 2011

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition January 2011

    jiaaa beautifull..mein keh rahi hon yeh comp u ne hi jitna hai..meri taraf se dherron daad is poetry ke liye
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition January 2011

    Tere Begair Beetay
    Her Saal Ki Tarhan
    Piya! Dekh Yeh Saal B Udas Raha
    Tu Na Raha Na Teri Koi Umeed Rahi
    Kch B Tu Na Mere Pas Raha
    Jab Jab Tujay Dhondnay Nikali
    Khali Nazar Khali Her Dar o Dewar Raha
    Raat Bhar Jagna, Haath Utha K Tujay Mangna
    Dekh Kaisay Sab Kch Bekaar Raha
    Buhat Koshish Ki Tujay Bhol Janay Ki
    Mager Jana!
    Tera Khayal Her Pal Mere Sath Raha
    Phir Wohi Hemsha Ki Tarha
    Tere Begair Yeh Saal Bhi Soogwar Raha...

    By Misbah Faraz Khan
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Poet Club Competition January 2011

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition January 2011

    jiaaa abhii takk yourzzz iss the best

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