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    cute Poetry : Unhappiness grew nd lit up the spark.

    Alone and in pain, I sit in the dark.
    Unhappiness grew and lit up the spark,
    The flames start to grow and warm up my fear
    Around my heart, flames of despair leer.

    But steady flames hold a calming effect,
    Hypnotize and grant more time to reflect.
    Fire warms the chill of love's past regrets,

    Icy chains and locks are what love begets.

    Emotional fire burns in my head,
    Flames of betrayal or love instead?
    Without the cool breath of love's sweet caress,
    Without knowing wintry love's happiness.

    I'm trapped in the fires of loneliness,
    Looking for the cool calm waves of kindness.
    Choice is ahead, do I love or still yearn?
    I decided to be alone and burn.

    --Elizebath

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    Default Re: Poetry : Unhappiness grew nd lit up the spark.

    Nice je

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    Default Re: Poetry : Unhappiness grew nd lit up the spark.

    nice..........


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    Default Re: Poetry : Unhappiness grew nd lit up the spark.

    nice....thanx foh shearing bhaiya

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    Default Re: Poetry : Unhappiness grew nd lit up the spark.

    very nice
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    Default Re: Poetry : Unhappiness grew nd lit up the spark.

    Thanks Mohabbatain, Georgie Appu,
    Dhanak and Ikram,
    for attending and praising the poetry
    thus you given honour to the Poet
    of the poetry. So Nice of U guys.

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