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    "Kabhi Kabhi Kuch Dair ke liye Khamosh ho jane mein hi behtri hoti hai..tammaam sochein jhatak kar..tamam alhaam,wasoose,aney wali zindagi ke dukh,pareshaniyaan zehen se jhatak kar kuch dair ke liye hi sahi Relax ho jana chahiye,Jab ap apne jazbat ko khamoshi ki neend sula dein ge,,tu dil aur dimaag ke beech chari jang khud ba khud khatam ho jaye gi.....khud ba khud apne anjaam ko pohanch jaye gi...Phir aap mehsoos karein ge ke apke andar besukoni ka koi wajood hi nahiin.."

    (Written By:Mishaal Ahmed)
    Last edited by мιѕнααℓ; 07-01-2011 at 04:53 PM.
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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    nice................


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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    Quote Originally Posted by dhanak View Post
    nice................
    thanx..........
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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    hmmm haan khamosh hona chahye
    sakon milta hia..
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    accha likha hai Mish or sach bhi:Rosee:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    achi soch hay.. per bohot mushkil kam hay..

    nicely written .. keep it up..s

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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    very very nice

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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    bohot acha likha hai magar mujhe aesa lagta hai k yeh word "jazbaton" urdu ka nahi hai. aksar indian dramas mei yeh word use hotay huwe suna hai.

    Urdu mei word Jazba aur uski jama Jazbaat hai.
    Please correct me if I am worng.
    mera libas hai tu zps3e44c641 - ~*Kham0shi*~

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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    he is right.. jazbaton ki jagha jazbon ko ,ya ehsaasaat ka word use kia ja skta hy..

    khir over all v.v.well written .
    Last edited by Killer; 05-01-2011 at 09:04 PM.

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    Default Re: ~*Kham0shi*~

    Thanks killer.
    Or likha tou bohot zabardast hai uss mei tou koi shak ki baat nahi
    mera libas hai tu zps3e44c641 - ~*Kham0shi*~

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