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    Thumbs up ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    yeh jo chaahaton ke bazaar hein yahaan bik rahae hein sabhi magar
    yahaan kon ley ga wafaa ki jinss, bhala kya miley ga nafaa mujhay.


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    Default Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    Wah kya kahne. Kamaal hai. Aapke is Aashaar main 'mohabat' shabd to aaya he nahin.
    Aapneek kai bari guide kiya tha hamain ki
    MK main pesh kerne wali sher o shayari
    mohabbat alfaaz aana jaroori hai isi liye poonch baithi.
    Ager beadbi ho gayi ho to maaf kijiyega.
    Dekhie Mohterma, gustake maaf. Humne ye aapko reply alag alag line main banaya
    words ko enlarge kerna chaha na hue, colour
    dena chaha na hua, 6 lines main rakhna chaha
    paragraph ban gaya, middle mainrakhna chaha
    na hua. Icon response nahin de raahe hai. Aur
    ye pichle do din se ye icon response nahin
    ker rahe hain. Ye maine kai section main try
    ker liya. Jabki do din pale tek aisa kuch na
    tha. Aap issection ki Moderator hain, please
    see to it and do the needful. Ager meri galti
    hoti to do din pahle tek theek thaak kyon
    chal raha tha. Maine SOS ke Moderators se
    bhi request ke thi. Thanks.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 08-01-2011 at 09:29 AM.

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    Default Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    sorry to interrupt . . actually ismei lafz "wafa" aur "chahat" dono hi shamil hain jo mohabbat se relate karte hain,
    i think naaz k kehne ka maqsad ye hoga ke is section me mohabbat se related, aur aisi poetry shamil ki jae jismei lafz "mohabat" ata ho ya lafz mohabbt ki akkasi karta ho .

    @ Naaz
    you are requested to please correct me if i am wrong.

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    snow Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    yeh jo chaahaton ke bazaar hein yahaan bik rahae hein sabhi magar
    yahaan kon ley ga wafaa ki jinss, bhala kya miley ga nafaa mujhay.

    Mujhybusetnakehnahai - ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

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    Default Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    sorry to interrupt . . actually ismei lafz "wafa" aur "chahat" dono hi shamil hain jo mohabbat se relate karte hain,
    i think naaz k kehne ka maqsad ye hoga ke is section me mohabbat se related, aur aisi poetry shamil ki jae jismei lafz "mohabat" ata ho ya lafz mohabbt ki akkasi karta ho .

    @ Naaz
    you are requested to please correct me if i am wrong.
    jee bilkul ap ne sahi bataya hai


    Pyar . MOhabbat . chahat se related poetry share ki jasakti hia or main tu aksar pyar or chahat waley ashar share karti hon..
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    Quote Originally Posted by R. M. Dixit View Post
    Wah kya kahne. Kamaal hai. Aapke is Aashaar main 'mohabat' shabd to aaya he nahin.
    Aapneek kai bari guide kiya tha hamain ki
    MK main pesh kerne wali sher o shayari
    mohabbat alfaaz aana jaroori hai isi liye poonch baithi.
    Ager beadbi ho gayi ho to maaf kijiyega.
    Dekhie Mohterma, gustake maaf. Humne ye aapko reply alag alag line main banaya
    words ko enlarge kerna chaha na hue, colour
    dena chaha na hua, 6 lines main rakhna chaha
    paragraph ban gaya, middle mainrakhna chaha
    na hua. Icon response nahin de raahe hai. Aur
    ye pichle do din se ye icon response nahin
    ker rahe hain. Ye maine kai section main try
    ker liya. Jabki do din pale tek aisa kuch na
    tha. Aap issection ki Moderator hain, please
    see to it and do the needful. Ager meri galti
    hoti to do din pahle tek theek thaak kyon
    chal raha tha. Maine SOS ke Moderators se
    bhi request ke thi. Thanks.

    mera khayal hia Pyar .. chahat Mohabbat main he shumar hota hai
    agar nahi hote tu app mjhe batadain.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    cute Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    sorry to interrupt . . actually ismei lafz "wafa" aur "chahat" dono hi shamil hain jo mohabbat se relate karte hain,
    i think naaz k kehne ka maqsad ye hoga ke is section me mohabbat se related, aur aisi poetry shamil ki jae jismei lafz "mohabat" ata ho ya lafz mohabbt ki akkasi karta ho .

    @ Naaz
    you are requested to please correct me if i am wrong.
    I am sorry Killer dear, there was no such intention to hurt you. Thanks for intevening and explaining me the meaning. I just in casual way asked Mohterma regarding using of mohabbat word in an Aashar, Nazm or Ghazal etc. Once I asked about MK when she explained me the way to present in MK section. Thats why I asked Mohterma to clear my understanding. It was't a criticism as third one has to intevene. After asking I had already expressed my excuse to our respected Admin Sahiba. So dear friend don't pull on further. That is that. okay.

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    cute Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post



    mera khayal hia Pyar .. chahat Mohabbat main he shumar hota hai
    agar nahi hote tu app mjhe batadain.
    Mohterma aapne baja phermaya ki Chahet, pyaar, ulfet sub mohabbat he se talluk rakhte hain ya kahiye ke usi ke synonym hai. Ye to main aapse apne pan main poonch baitha, in casual way or routine way. My intention was not to hurt you. Isi liye poonchne ke baad i said ki "ager beadbi ho gayi ho to maaf keejiyega" bari tehjeeb se likha tha . aap kahen to ek baar phir sahi. Waise aap hamare Guide, Philospher friend and guardian hain.Mujhe ek sher yaad aagaya, gustaqi maaf, peshe khidmat: "Aapse muqabile ki kise talab hai hajoor, mera lahoo he bahut hai teri heena ke baad." Khudahafiz.

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    Default Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    Wahh wahh
    boht khoob 3



    @R.M.D. In Urdu poetry as long the poetry has directly or indirectly related feelings of love, betrayal etc. u'r most welcum to share it. doesn't need to have exact wordings of love and so on.
    p6707 - ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011
    15pld04 - ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011


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    Default Re: ~Mohabbat Aik Shair ~ 8th January 2011

    ok hai

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