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    16646518451453278291216 - Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    Tanha aur udaas chehre,
    tanhayi ke maare chehrey,
    dukh ki tasweerein buhut hain,
    tanha kuch taqdeerein buhut hain,
    khoon ke ansoo rotey chehrey,
    tanha aur udaas chehrey,
    mittey mittey naqosh buhut hain,
    adhey adhorey tanha buhut hain,
    jaan na le daley tanhayi,
    akhir kis ko raas yeh ayi..!!!

    Written by:Mishaal Ahmed
    Last edited by мιѕнααℓ; 20-01-2011 at 02:20 PM.
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    Default Re: Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    ap sad q?
    wesay acha likha/up
    mjh say tou zaida


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    Default Re: Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    nice
    achi nazm hay

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    Default Re: Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    Quote Originally Posted by dhanak View Post
    ap sad q?
    wesay acha likha/up
    mjh say tou zaida
    Quote Originally Posted by Rrahi View Post
    nice
    achi nazm hay
    thankyou all..

    pata nahiin dhanak jab likhi thi tu buhut udaas thi kisi waja se..ab nahiin hun
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    Default Re: Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    bht khOob...FB pEr rEad kari thi but cOmmEnt karnE ka mOqa nahi mila. . .
    198343 196670793697111 5932486 n - Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY


    like karlo
    kOi bhEE aisa lamha nahi. . .
    jismEin mEre tU hOta nahi.

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    Default Re: Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    acha likha hay dear per.. incomplete si hay.. ham qafia de kar end krdo..
    aur jb tak feeling na ho kisi bhi terha ki.. poetry likhi hi nahi ja skti.. boht acha likha hay.
    keep it up..

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    Default Re: Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    Mishaal tum likhti acha ho leken upar se parhte aye tu neche aker sub garbar hojati hia samjh he nahi ata phir upar kiya parha neche kiya hogaya is tarah tawaja do na zara
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Tanha Tanha Udaas ChehreY

    hummmm,nice likha hai mishi,good,keep it up

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    chaloo maii apkoo ekk achaa start detii hooo,,,, yaade tanhaee maii zindagi guzar detayy haii,terrii yadoo maii jal ker khudi ko pukaar letay haiin.agayy app likhoo mishii

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