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    Default rag-rag meN mire dil kii bajne lagii shahnaaii

    salaam dosto aur dostanyo ]

    ummeed hai k mizaaj-e-giraamii ba_Kahir o 'aafiiyat hoNge. aapkii Khidmat emn apnii ek dai'reena Ghazal pesh karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huN is ummeed e qawii ke saath k aapkii taba'-e-naazuk par baar-e-giraaN na guzregii. aapkii aaraa, tanqees o tanqeed kaa shiddat intizaar rahegaa...shukria

    faqat Khaak-nashiiN,

    _______Hashmat
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    1.
    paate hii jhalak unkii dil ban gayaa saudaaii
    ik pal kaa nazaarah thaa, ik 'umr kii rusvaaii

    2.
    jis_dam tu uThii so kar, lete huye jamhaaii'
    hai mauj-e-balaa, be_shak, zaalim! tiri angRaaii

    3.
    chiTkii thii kalii ik_din, thaa saaraa chaman raqsaaN
    aayaa thaa koii jaise gulshan meN bahaar aaii

    4.
    chhip chhip ke raheNge vo parde meN nihaaN kab_tak?
    dekheNge sar-e-mai'Hshar ik_din unheN shai'daaii

    5.
    aaGhaaz se Khilqat ne DhoonDhii hai, magar kis ne
    paaii hai kahaaN unke altaaf kii gai'hraaii

    6.
    ik qatra nahiiN KhuuN kaa, dil ban gayaa sai'Hraa saa
    'onqaa hai jahaaN Hasrat juuN laala-e-sai'Hraaii

    7.
    andaaz-e-sitam_gaarii dunyaa se niraalaa hai
    hai unke karam meN bhii ik Khoobii-e-yak_taaii

    8.
    dam bhar na rahe jinke dam_bharne se Ghaafil ham
    dekho to naseeb apnaa! nikle vohii harjaaii

    9.
    yeh bhii to karam hai ki zaKhmoN ko jilaate haiN
    hai unkii jafaa meN bhii, andaaz-e-MaseeHaaii

    10.
    maKhmoor nigaaheN jab Saaqii kii uThiiN mujh par
    rag_rag meN mire dil kii bajne lagii shai'hnaaii

    11.
    kab saamne aa kar vo, "Sai'hbaa Ji" miTaayeNge
    din_raat kii be_taabii, dard-e-Gham-e-tanhaaii
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    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    Default Re: rag-rag meN mire dil kii bajne lagii shahnaaii

    wah wah kia maara hai ...........

    jus kidding
    such arealy nice wrk
    keep it up ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*zaib*~ View Post
    wah wah kia maara hai ...........

    jus kidding
    such arealy nice wrk
    keep it up ...
    thankoo Zaib...bas dekhtii raho kahaN akhaN se laa kar tukkaa maruuNgaa
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    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    Default Re: rag-rag meN mire dil kii bajne lagii shahnaaii

    jo bhi karna bas ham pay reham karna .....

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*zaib*~ View Post
    jo bhi karna bas ham pay reham karna .....
    lo kar lo baat ab tum par raHm kiyaa to poetry kis ko sunaauuNgaa? kisi gadhe ko?
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    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    a re-run of this Ghazal.
    0e480d0a 1548 44d4 a4a0 c060e77c8f98 - rag-rag meN mire dil kii bajne lagii shahnaaiiimages?qtbnANd9GcRzS69 Aa0hT FRo5Gf7r7mr5ShrZII6bgd8l7Z0JwQF4ALMmkG - rag-rag meN mire dil kii bajne lagii shahnaaii

    one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
    The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
    Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
    Aligarh Muslim University
    ALIGARH, India


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    Walaikum Assalaam @Hashmat Usmani;

    Ab tou yeh ghazal 'Daireena' kay bajayay 'Dair-say' hogayii hay aur yaqeen karain aap kay alfaaz humarii taba'a-e-sakht per aik 'khushgawar' muskurahat bikhair gayay... infact woh ANGRAYII waala sha'air paRh kar tou 'Qateel sahab' ki yaad aagayiii..

    Achii poetry kartay hain aap, isi tarah likjtay rahay aur hum sab say share kartay rahyeh, khush rahyeh.

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