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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    v nice

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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    Quote Originally Posted by MeOow View Post
    bahout achay daant saaf kiay hain ..ab chocolate wapis na kha lena ..theek haina
    Sach Hai, Baja Hai ,Mujhsey Shikayat Janab Ki
    Seh Seh K Mainey Zulm,Hai Adat Kharab Ki

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post


    pori quote krun ? bohat achi likhi hay... bas ik chez... yaha "De De" ki jagha sirf ik bar "de" use karti to best ho jata... still its shandar

    Poet club me kafi time bad boht achi poetry parhi.. log to likh rahe nhi ajkal

    zabardsat hai
    keep it up
    bahout shukriya killer
    mujhey to is main abhi bhi bahout kami lag rahi hai ..laken jo nishaandahi aapney ki us k liay bahout bahout shukriya ..main perhti rahi to acha likhti rahoongi

    wesey mujhey nahi maloom k log likh rahay hain k nahi ..mainey to khud yeh 5 saal pehley likhi thi ..aur woh bhi kab mood ban jaiey uska keh nahi sakti ..koshish kerti hoon aaj kal per mujhey jab khud hi samajh nahi aati to share kia keron
    Sach Hai, Baja Hai ,Mujhsey Shikayat Janab Ki
    Seh Seh K Mainey Zulm,Hai Adat Kharab Ki

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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    Quote Originally Posted by noty girl View Post
    v nice
    thanx sweety
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    Seh Seh K Mainey Zulm,Hai Adat Kharab Ki

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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    bht he achi nazm likhi hai...
    sath parhte parhte mjhe yaqen hogaya tha k aj main andhi shayd or hojaon ina chota ku hai bara nahi karna hota

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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    bht he achi nazm likhi hai...
    sath parhte parhte mjhe yaqen hogaya tha k aj main andhi shayd or hojaon ina chota ku hai bara nahi karna hota
    shayad aur andhi hojaon

    mutbal k kuch isharay mil gaiey hain aap k andhay k teer k

    wesey thanku
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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    thanx noty
    Sach Hai, Baja Hai ,Mujhsey Shikayat Janab Ki
    Seh Seh K Mainey Zulm,Hai Adat Kharab Ki

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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    very veryyyyy very nice,buhatt achaa likhaa haii,you must write more dear,very nice again

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    Default Re: Mujhey Zindagi Se Rehai Dey Deyy..

    Quote Originally Posted by Saffroni View Post
    bahout shukriya killer
    mujhey to is main abhi bhi bahout kami lag rahi hai ..laken jo nishaandahi aapney ki us k liay bahout bahout shukriya ..main perhti rahi to acha likhti rahoongi

    wesey mujhey nahi maloom k log likh rahay hain k nahi ..mainey to khud yeh 5 saal pehley likhi thi ..aur woh bhi kab mood ban jaiey uska keh nahi sakti ..koshish kerti hoon aaj kal per mujhey jab khud hi samajh nahi aati to share kia keron
    mujhe boht beher lagi, may be mistakes hon but mujhe nahi dikhki... jo thora odd laga wo batadia, baki sab boht best hay.
    you're welcome
    5 saal pehle likhi thi ye .. acha nice, budhi to tab bhi itni hi hogi ap
    ji koshish kijiye, koshishen hi kam yab hoti hain
    i'll wait for your next poem/ghazal in this section..

    Allah bless you. keep it up

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