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    Default BalTo Aur IGni (Story FoR Kids)


    BalTo Aur Igni

    StoRy For KiDS


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    Pyare bachon north pole ke kisi jungle mein aik penguin Igni aur bear balto raha karte they..Dono buhut ache dost the..Aur dono ki pasand bhi bilkul same thi !! dono aik dusre ka khayal bhi buhut rakhte the..jo cheez igni apne liye lata wohi balto ke liye aati aur balto bear jo cheez laata wahi cheez igni ke liye bhi laata...maslan balto ko igni ka sweater buhut pasand tha jis mein igni ki picture bani hui thi..Igni ko pata chala tu us ne usi waqt balto ko sweater de dia.. Isi tarhaan dono aik dusre se pyaar kartey they...Igni aur balto ko machliyaan buhut pasand thin...roz dono aik dusre ki dawatein kartey they..khoob hansi mazak kartey they...khoob masti hoti thi...

    Aik din aisi hi dawat thi..Ke achanak Igni ne balto se aik sawaal poocha

    Igni:"Balto ! tumhein mera ghar(IGLOO) kesa lagta hai??"
    Balto:"mujhe na..tumhara IGLOO buhut pasand hain..mera ghar tu tumhare ghar jesa khoobsurat nahe hai, toota phoota ghaar hai...tum buhut khush qismat ho Igni...itne pyare ghar mein rehtey ho"

    Igni:"tu kia hua dost mein tumharey liye bilkul wesa hi ghar bana dun ga jesa mera hai.."

    Balto:"Arey wah yeh tu bari achi baat hui ! mein kal aonga tu mera ghar tayyar rakhna...phir mein inaam mein tumhein buhut saari machliyaan pakar kar doonga theek hai..?"

    Igni:"Haan..theek hai..yummy mein buhut acha ghar banao ga"

    Agley din subha subha balto gaata hua..uchalta koodta..Igni ke ghar pohncha..tu Igni penguin ke ghar ke samne..hi buhut hi pyara sa ghar khara tha...igni buhut khush hua..magar jab uske size pe nazar pari tu.... uski hansi nikal gayi

    Balto:" ohhh..hooo.ohhh..hheheheeee..ahhaaaaa..heeee..ahahaa.."

    Igni uskey hansne ki awaaz sun kar bahar nikal aya..dekha tu buhut mazeydaar situation thi..balto tha ke hansa chala ja raha tha..jaise usey kisi ne mazeydaar lateefa suna diya ho..Igni ne socha ke chalo acha hai balto khush ho raha hai apna ghar dekh kar..phir woh bhi hansne laga uske saath..


    Balto:"Dost..hehhe yeh tumne kia banaya hai..hehehe yeh ghar itna..chota hai ke mere haath aur pair hi andar ja skte hain hehhee ..ohho.."

    Igni ki hansi ko break lag gaye..aur jo baat balto ne usey batayii tu woh bhi hasne laga
    Igni:"arey yaar waqai..is mein tu tum sama hi nahiin sakte, sorry mein tu khud itna chota sa hoon tu in bari bari baraf ki bhari inteen nahiin utha sakta tha na.."

    balto:"ohoo..ab kia hoga ab kiya karein?"

    Igni:"Aik rasta hai..dost kyun na yeh kaam tum khud karo..tum size mein itne barey ho tum asaani se kar logey"
    Balto:"Areyyy..naheen.naheen mein kese karon??is mein t buhut mehnat hai..mujhe tu kuch nahiin aata.."

    Igni:"Mein tumhein bataon ga na..aur mehnat mein azmat hoti hai dost tum buhut acha ghar bana lo ge..kyun ke har kaam pehle mushkil lagta hai magar jab aajata hai tu asaan ho jata hai"

    Igni ki tassali dene ke bad balto bear kaam mein lag gaya..barey barey baraf ke tukrey laakar rakhte huye, kitni baar bechara bhalo jo pehli bar mehnat kar raha tha ..thak gaya aur uska paseena behne laga..magar igni penguin usko tassali deta raha..aur akhir IGLOO ban hi gaya...Balto buhut khush hua..

    aur laga gaaney..naachney..

    Baltoo:"hooo hoo..mera ghar ban gaya..aha hahaa thankyou Igni penguin thankyou mere dost haa haa"

    Igni:"Maine kuch nahiin kia dost sab tumne hi kia hai..tumne kitni mehnat kar ke yeh pyara sa Igloo banaya hai" igni ne uskey kandhey par haath rakhtey huye muskura kar kaha..

    Phir dono ne bara jashan manaya..Balto ne Igni ko dheer saari machliyaan lakar di jinki dawat bhi hui aur Igni penguin ne kuch freez bhi kar li..aur balto bear ko apna aik aur sweater bhi gift kia jis per Igni penguin ki aik aur khoobsurat tasweer thi

    balto:"yeh mere liye dost?? yeh tu tumhara sweeter hai"

    Igni penguin:"yeh tumhari mehnat ka inaam hai"

    Dekha bachon..mehnat kabhi rayegaan nahiin jaati..Balto bear ne apna Igloo bhi bana liya aur Igni penguin ne usko gift bhi diya..aap bhi mehnat karo aur apne doston ke kaam ao jese Igni penguin apne dost ke kaam aya aur usko dheer sari machliyon ka gift mila..



    Moral

    Dost dost ke kaam ata hai aur mehnat karna kuch mushkil nahi kyunke har kaam pehli baar mushkil hota hai magar mehnat karein tu asaan ho jata hai.


    THE END

    WriTteN By:MiShaal AhmeD



    Last edited by мιѕнααℓ; 24-01-2011 at 12:33 PM.
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    Default Re: BalTo Aur IGni

    Kabhi kabhi Kids per bhi story likh leti hoon
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    Default Re: BalTo Aur IGni

    hihihihihihi very very nice,lolzzzzz

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    Default Re: BalTo Aur IGni

    Quote Originally Posted by shaista rao View Post
    hihihihihihi very very nice,lolzzzzz
    thanx
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    Default Re: BalTo Aur IGni

    you are welcome dear,so you like to write storeys?????

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    Quote Originally Posted by shaista rao View Post
    you are welcome dear,so you like to write storeys?????
    yes..
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    Default Re: BalTo Aur IGni

    then why dont you send them for magzines,like kids magzine etc,they might be published,

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    Default Re: BalTo Aur IGni

    sahi hai yeh b
    mere liye hiana aik main he tu bacha porey sd per
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Quote Originally Posted by shaista rao View Post
    then why dont you send them for magzines,like kids magzine etc,they might be published,
    hmm nahiin mujhe aisi koi chah nahiin hai magazine mein publish karwane ki.. 2sri waja hai ke magazine mein bari aney mein time lagta hai.. aur mere khayaal se unke mayyar tak pohanchna shayad buhut mushkil hai..

    sd per likh leti hun yehi buhut hai mere liye
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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    sahi hai yeh b
    mere liye hiana aik main he tu bacha porey sd per
    bachon ke liye likhna hi tu mushkil hota hai nazo.. aur writer ko har topic per likhna chahiye.. chahey forum per kids ho na ho bandey ki salahiyat dekhney waley tu hain na

    btw u thori na bachaw baby tu sky hai
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