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    candel Poet Club Competition Feb 2011



    is baar app koi b Nazm le or us Nazm ko apne andaz se likhey yanee ...khayalat dosrey poet ke hon or alfaz ap ke ...or jis b poet ki Nazm se mutasir ho ker likh rahe hon wo b share kijeye ga...aksar aisa hota hiana ke kisi b poet ka aik jumla b hamain bhot acha lagta hai or hum us per kuch likh detey hian tu aise he karna hai..umid hai yeh muqabla pasand aye ga.


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    1 ... Aik member aik he bar Share Karsakta hai.
    2 ... Aik jaisa mat share kijeye ga.
    3 ... Comp ki last Date 21 Feb hai.

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    itna muskil kam
    koi asan sa rakhana tha

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    v nice competition

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    mEIne "Ahsaan Danish" ki Nazm.... "jashn-e-bechaargi" ka concept (beti ki rukhsati mein dad k emOtiOns) take kar k yE nazm likhi hai. . .

    hai daag-e-dil ik shaam-e-siYah pOsh ka manzar...
    tha zulmat-e-khamosh mein shehzaada-e-khaawar
    ye waqt adraak dukhtar-e-mazdoOr ki rukhsat
    Allah qaYamat thi, qaYamat thi, qaYamat

    nOsha ka jo sar pe tha baandhaY huE sEhra
    bharpOor jawani mein tha utra hua sehra
    ghum tapakta tha bashashat ki nazar se
    murjhaYe rukhsaar theY faaqOn ke asar se
    kurta bhi purana tha, pagri bhi purani
    aankhOn mein tha bemehri Aaalam ka tamasha
    majma tha ye jis khasta-o-afsurda makan per
    tha bhais mein shadi k wahan aalam-e-mehsar

    daalna tha ghOonja hua ronaY ki sada sE
    ik dard tapakta tha ark-e-naak hawa sE
    amma ki thi beti ki judaYi mein yE halat
    cheekhOn mEin dhalaY jataY thaY jazbat-e-muhabbat
    tha baap ka yE haal k ghum ka tha maara
    uthta tha to deewar ka leta tha sahara
    larki ka ye aalam tha k aapaY ko samataY
    guriYa si bani bethi thi chaadar ko lapaitaY
    thi paOn mein paazaib na pechanaY mein teeka
    us khaka-e-iflas ka har rang tha pheeka
    aakhir na raha baap ko jazbat pe qabOo
    tharranaY lagaY hOnt, tapaknaY lagaY ansOo

    kehne laga nosha se k aye jaan-e-padrasan
    aye wahaj-e-sukun, lakht-e-jigar, nOor-e-nazar sun
    garcha mein nazrOn mein taareek khudaYi
    haazir hai meri umr ki masoOm kamaYi
    is saanwalaY chehraY pe yE taquddus ki zaYa hai
    ye paikar-e-iffat hai ye qanoos-e-haya hai
    iss k liye chakki bhi nayi cheez nahi hai
    beti hai meri dukhtar-e-parvaiz nahi hai

    ghurbat mein yE paida hui ghurbat mein palli hai
    khuddari-o-tehzeeb k saanchaY mein dhalli hai
    zanhaat ya zewar ki tamanna na karaY gi
    aisa na karaY gi kabhi aisa na karaY gi
    shikwa issaY taqdeer ka karna nahi ata
    adraak ki sarhad se guzarna nahi ata
    hai sabr ki aadi issaY faaqOn ki hai adat
    maa baap se paYi hai viraasat men kaYanat
    iski bhi khushi hogi tumhari jo raza ho
    tum iskE liYe doOsrE darjaY pe khuda hO. . .


    wO hai khushi ka Aalam ?
    Ya hai dukh ki wajah ?
    mujhE dEkh kar wOh muskuraYen gaY
    kabhi mujhkO dEkh k wOh hans parEin gaY
    mEre PAPA jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY
    wOh yE sOch kar aaj khush hO rahE thaY
    mEin dulhan banOon gi to aisi lagoOn gi
    mEin dulhan banOon gi to waisi lagoOn gi
    aur YE suntaY suntaY jO aankhEin dikhi mujhkO
    chashmaY k pEEchaY wOh janaY kYOn nam thEEn
    mEin jab bEth-ti hOon to YE sOchti hOon
    mEre Papa jab mujhkO rukhsat karEin gaY
    mErE maathaY pEr ek bOsa to dEin gaY
    mErE gaalOn kO zOr sE kheench dEin gaY
    Aur apni AnkhOn mEin chashmaY k pEEchaY
    wOh AnsoO chupaanaY ki kOshish karEin gaY
    : )

    Last edited by O.o Ashi o.O; 02-02-2011 at 09:21 PM.
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    like karlo
    kOi bhEE aisa lamha nahi. . .
    jismEin mEre tU hOta nahi.

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    ye to bht mushkil hai khiayl kisi ka aur poetry apni...i cant do this aapo....

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    aray yeh kaya......

    nai appo aisa nai likh sakti main...sorry
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    Nyc competition. Mtlb ye na k zamin nazm ya ghazal ki hu, maslan, suna aisa nai krtay, safar tanha nai krtay, ab hum isi tarz pe likhain k, sunu aisa nai krna,muje tanha na chorna,

    tym mila to zaror part lun gi.

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    hmm

    yaar valentine poem ka compition rkh lena tha na,...

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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    kiya karon ab change kardo naya laga deti hon comp
    i thnk is main koi part nahi le ga
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    Default Re: Poet Club Competition Feb 2011

    Mushkil comp tha isliye main yeh comp closd kar rahe hon
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