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    Default Re: Toot jatay hain

    alfaaz thore ham qaafia nai ho rahe.. concept acha hay ,
    effort appreciated, keep it up

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    Default Re: Toot jatay hain

    agree wid killer
    khayal bhot acha hia
    keep likhing
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    alfaaz thore ham qaafia nai ho rahe.. concept acha hay ,
    effort appreciated, keep it up
    thank you............
    hum qafia kese hon gay main koi asli wali poet thora he hun
    i hope so kisi din yeh b achay ho jayen gay
    thanx for reading
    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    agree wid killer
    khayal bhot acha hia
    keep likhing
    thanx for reading Naz apiya
    hmmm yup wo note ker liya main nay abhi hala k bht kaant chaant k baad yeh share kiya tha


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    Default Re: Toot jatay hain

    ho jaenge.. keep writing.. urdu vocabulary barjao.. dosre poets ko parho.. inshallah aur acha karogi

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    ho jaenge.. keep writing.. urdu vocabulary barjao.. dosre poets ko parho.. inshallah aur acha karogi
    hmmm reading tou rehti hy but vocabulary ki mere pas hmesha say kami he rehi hy
    really thanx .......


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    Default Re: Toot jatay hain

    nice
    achi nazm hay dhanak

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    Default Re: Toot jatay hain

    accha likha hai
    keep it up


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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